Blood On My Hands

[DelinQuent]

this is just a promo verse and hook to remind everyone that i still exist.

concept of the shit is, last night, literally, i had a dream that i murdered someone but had no memory of doing so. i was being sent to jail.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/61969497eccbc0d6/

My album name has changed from "Dreams of Nightmares" to "Going, Going, Gone." The new title represents how with each track i make, it sort of drains me of emotion for awhile.

i hope you guys enjoy the track, leave some feedback

EDIT forgot lyrics-
they saying...
that i slit him ripped him ditched, him left his body in a river/
and i swear i don't remember, no the 5th of last September/
they swear i am prentendin, say i belong in prison/
and they say they found the weapon, in the top drawer of my dresser/
say they found my DNA, all over the murder blade/
comes together perfectly, best get set to go away/
never see the sky again, they say i'ma die in here/
and that i'ma fry in hell, i just wan know why the hell/
am i bein framed? is this just all a game?
or is this the real thang? i mean whats the meaning?/
cause i don't see it, i must be dreaming/
but i hear some screaming, you can hear his blood curdle/
he goes fetal and he turtles, and i don't wanna hurt him/
the next second he is murdered, and my memory is blurrin/
top drawer weapons buried, nyquil i take some/
next second sleep, then i wake up/

[IceAxe]

I dig the concept.
Chorus was ok...wasn't feeling the "bl-bl-bl-blood" thing though
The sort of melodic rapping parts were a nice touch
Flows,lyrics, all that shit was cool

i'd personally like to see you expand on this somehow, good work

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh shit thats some good shit DQ...
i like your flow much better...aint this expanding type of flow....
mixing was a lil unclear..so was the pronouncation..if i hadnt the lyrics at some points i'd be lost lol
but nice concept...nice lyrics..nice flow
if your album will sound like this...

[DelinQuent]

thanks guys.

not sure if i'll continue this song or not.

as for my album sounding like this, i doubt it lol. all songs on the album will be of this caliber though. i've been focusing on choruses and flows verrrrry much.

[<Stiiccy>]

I wonder how a fart would sound in autotune?

nice verse...Shitty flow tho not really but still you fucker commin up in my thread HATIN ON MY SHIT

[DelinQuent]

i wasnt hating sticcy

but thank you my love

[<Stiiccy>]

i wasnt hating sticcy

but thank you my love

we should felch..

Do you like...................hamsters

[DelinQuent]

hamsters... I FUCKIN' LOVE EM!

[Mr. Chambers]

this was ok........ncie quality......the flow was pretty solid all around...i like the idea of the track.......with a lil mroe effort it could make a sick album cut......the chorus was kinda meh.....overall not bad........keep dropping

[DelinQuent]

thanks man, returning feed now.

[DelinQuent]

thanks, i'm thinking about it, maybe with an altered chorus. we'll see.

[Xray]

Gotta say that blood autotune hook is kind of catchy.

Sounds like your mixing has improved some how, your voice sounds more natural, like you used less effects or something? Anyway it was good shit man, flow was superb, delivery was good also. Hot verse man, so is the beat, finish this song man it sounds dope so far.

[DelinQuent]

?!?!? sajjad didnt hate the autotune?!?!? lol

no sir, haven't changed my mixing.

to finish the song i'm not sure what i'd do, since i sort of wrapped up the concept in one verse, i might think of something though,

[James R.]

I really like this track. The autotune was ok, nothing amazing, but it was cool. The hook was nice. Flow was better than most of the shit I've heard from you. Good job man. Keep elevating.

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed james