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Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 28th, '09, 21:40

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6197759398d14267/

so i been gone for a few weeks ........i'm getting ready to go cook something...but when i get back i'll listen some songs and leave feedback...anyone else leave links and i'll return the favor :flower:



i told you i come back scorching//
rider of the night....you'll come back morning//
storming...warning.......do not approach if your raps boring//
told yall.....i'd be back like jordan//
with no bull......makes it so luring//
a word wizard......victims served home courting//
flow pouring....raps ass....and no more its//
empty mindless.....substance with no storage//
been nice since year one....fear none//
breathe hip hop........so it ain't near done//
so just allow me to make this more clear son//
i bring heat on beats.....so stay tuned to hear some//
fuck the beef shit.......diss tracks are past//
dance around opponents.....disstrack all the acts/
time is a gift.....cause tension for the losers//
live in the moment......i live for my presence in future//
so while your bottom lining....struggle to drop//
i'm in booths....writing ignighting my hustle to top//
baiting your hooks....i'm like the fuck is a flop//
try touching my spot.......bet that i'll muscle you off//
i'm tryna fuck with the sun.......now i'm double as hot//
got protection?.....i'll pop that lil bubble you got//
trust me.....you don't really tussle with tom//
fuck the haters.....the wack MC can guzzle my jock//


right back @ you......verse two in action//
don't battle.....so if its me verse you its black mail//
chambers...live by my words cuz i act real//
MC willing to collab turn into track meals//

fuck fooling i'm great//
got a rapid fire flow...........sound will drum roll ya away//
some fool ya...okay//
got me feeling like i'm either playin a game sharades.....or theres some rule to be fake//
got the tools to equate to becomin a legend//
a demon looking for a peice of the pie......huntin for heaven//
something they let in.....by simple mistake//
so if somethings get broke..........the answer's simple........replace//
you battle me?....when you can't even stand the war call//
my art pops..........compared to andy warhol//
dope as coke...........nah i ain't startin that//
king of pop...........serious as a heart attack//
......i'm nice...oh so raw with rap//
old heads need to let it go.....just part with that//
don't return with words.....cuz your ass is garbage....trash//
so before thinking of pay....try makin an honest track//
Last edited by Mr. Chambers on Jul 16th, '09, 18:50, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Robbie G » Jun 28th, '09, 21:54

I don't have any criticism but I really enjoyed that. :y:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 29th, '09, 00:23

good looks....up to the sky!
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 29th, '09, 01:00

live for my moment of presence in the future, DOPE line.

flow is nice, lyrics are dope too.

sorry for the short feed but this is just nice. not really any complaints. keep this up.
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 29th, '09, 06:00

^thank you for listening :flower:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Xray » Jun 29th, '09, 09:16

Vocals could of used less reverb and a de-esser, cause your S's are loud as hell. Besides that this track was dope. Flow n delivery was dope, so were the lyrics so keep it coming man.
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 29th, '09, 16:31

rofl......i actually put echo on my dubs....and i took it off this time just to try something different....but i guess i'll just go back.......thanks for the advice
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Kez » Jun 29th, '09, 17:07

I agree with the guy who said he had no criticism, i loved it

Btw, you from the UK? I heard references to Year 1 and references to "Jordan"? Just wonderin cause more UK people for the forum is always a good thing.

Yeah, thought the song was sick for a lil track.
Who made this beat? It's crazy
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 29th, '09, 17:16

^nah lol.....i'm from the US.......i ment jordan like Mike...

and its jay-z new song "DOA" its produced by NoID i think his name is.....

thankes for listening....i appreciate it
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby *MIRANDA* » Jul 8th, '09, 20:03

*bumps it onmy ipod*
this song is the shiznitt :flower:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 8th, '09, 20:12

why thank you miss miranda :flower: ....i appreciate you listening ;)
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Enimee » Jul 12th, '09, 21:53

sick shit i was really feelin this one keep at it cant wait for your next
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Slimm » Jul 12th, '09, 23:54

you should post Emotionless, thats a dope song.
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 13th, '09, 03:58

^how do you know about emotionless???? :unsure:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Slimm » Jul 13th, '09, 13:09

Im everwhere man.. everywhere
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