Don't Cross Me (snippet)

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 24th, '09, 21:17

I'm working on an album, this is a verse on it. Song is Don't Cross Me.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/63112184d1babdf2/

Split light in half to grip mics and Flash
when it goes to your ears it will leave a rash
when I spit some more your are bleeding ash
when I come real close you are seeping fast
Don't know how long will this evening last
no matter how long it will beat your ass
rob you for your wallet, keep the cash
put it to your head, the heat will lash
I blast and cock till your sleeping past
the time on the clock, and it's beepin wrath
bash you in the face you weakling trash
don't you dare even say I'm speaking rash
get sliced on your hand like your tweaking glass
put metal on my fist and your eating brass
searchin for this bitch like I'm seeking ass
to find and destroy with a beaming bash

by **Robbie G** » Jul 24th, '09, 21:27

Damn..your flow, lyrics and delivery were great on this. Definitely improved since the last time I listened to you. The quality wasn't perfect but I guess it's good enough.

Good job. :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 24th, '09, 21:39

Shady Babie wrote:Damn..your flow, lyrics and delivery were great on this. Definitely improved since the last time I listened to you. The quality wasn't perfect but I guess it's good enough.

Good job.

Thank you

My quality is from a 35$ mic from Radioshack bro, it is FAR from perfect, but I work with what I have.
''ya feel me?''

Website · by **Solace** » Jul 25th, '09, 00:03

Nice job man :y:

If only you had your old mic lol

by **Xray** » Jul 25th, '09, 01:33

Lyrics are hot, so is the flow and delivery. Everything is sick besides the mixing, quality is VERY bad. Should have mixed it differently, even leaving the vocals raw would of sounded better lol. But great job on the spitting, keep it up.

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 25th, '09, 01:36

Thanks dudes! :flower:

by **_Ironic_** » Jul 25th, '09, 02:55

somebody's been listenin to GT ronic.

:y:

your flow and delivery is way beyond what I expected it to be...like it seems like what I said to u just clicked fam, it doesn't seem rushed, and u can feel the emotion. awesome job bro...keep doin it.

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 25th, '09, 03:24

_Ironic_ wrote:somebody's been listenin to GT ronic.

your flow and delivery is way beyond what I expected it to be...like it seems like what I said to u just clicked fam, it doesn't seem rushed, and u can feel the emotion. awesome job bro...keep doin it.

Thanks homie! Ye your advice helped a lot. :worship:

by **neversnooze** » Jul 25th, '09, 03:37

your flow and delivery is right on point IMPRESSIVE!!! i cant wait to hear the full track :worship:

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 25th, '09, 03:57

neversnooze wrote:your flow and delivery is right on point IMPRESSIVE!!! i cant wait to hear the full track

Thanks bro :worship:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Jul 25th, '09, 19:04

delievery improved...you learned to control your voice..
lyrics are hot as usual
good verse
lookin forward to the whole track

by **da r star** » Jul 26th, '09, 02:45

MC Anonymous wrote:
Shady Babie wrote:Damn..your flow, lyrics and delivery were great on this. Definitely improved since the last time I listened to you. The quality wasn't perfect but I guess it's good enough.

Good job.

Thank you
My quality is from a 35$ mic from Radioshack bro, it is FAR from perfect, but I work with what I have.
''ya feel me?''

The snippets is cool, but boy you need a new mic. I bought a Audiotechnica AT2020 for 100$ shipping include on ebay. There's even a usb version of it. Save money and buy it. There's no way you can make an album with a 35$ mic. You have to take it seriously homie.

by **MC Anonymous** » Jul 26th, '09, 03:25

da r star wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Shady Babie wrote:Damn..your flow, lyrics and delivery were great on this. Definitely improved since the last time I listened to you. The quality wasn't perfect but I guess it's good enough.

Good job.

Thank you
My quality is from a 35$ mic from Radioshack bro, it is FAR from perfect, but I work with what I have.
''ya feel me?''

The snippets is cool, but boy you need a new mic. I bought a Audiotechnica AT2020 for 100$ shipping include on ebay. There's even a usb version of it. Save money and buy it. There's no way you can make an album with a 35$ mic. You have to take it seriously homie.

It's hard for me to make money cause' I'm only 16, I'm hoping to get a job soon so we'll see. :y:

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