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Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 23:35

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=suwHIoH3Leo

Tell me what you think. :worship: :worship:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby BILI » Aug 6th, '09, 23:35

Dope as fuck :y: :y: :y: I really loved it great job :worship:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby DaKidLilj » Aug 6th, '09, 23:43

holy shit dat was dope as fuck!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '09, 23:45

Dope, and ya welcome for uploading it :smoking:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 23:48

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby DaKidLilj » Aug 6th, '09, 23:50

so...when's da finished song coming? huh? huh?




huh?
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Re: New Snippet

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 01:16

DaKidLilj wrote:so...when's da finished song coming? huh? huh?




huh?

Soon bro. :y:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '09, 01:34

Wow man, great shit! Your flow was on point throughout, and the rhymes were hot as hell. I felt towards the end of the track you're voice was kinda slippin', but you maintained good vocals for most of the piece. Can't wait to hear some more, man!

Check out my new piece in the CW, let me know what ya' think.
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Re: New Snippet

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 7th, '09, 02:51

Steve Spag wrote:Wow man, great shit! Your flow was on point throughout, and the rhymes were hot as hell. I felt towards the end of the track you're voice was kinda slippin', but you maintained good vocals for most of the piece. Can't wait to hear some more, man!

Check out my new piece in the CW, let me know what ya' think.

:worship: :worship: Thanks a lot bro
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Requiem » Aug 7th, '09, 04:01

i say this every time but ur best yet :smoking:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '09, 05:38

Your flow improved, good shit. Delivery improved, good shit. Now only thing that you need to do is be more clear, cause I honestly barely understood any words lol. Gotta work on that if you want people to know what your saying, but yo good improvement man, keep it up. Mixing sounded nice to. :y:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby gutawafang » Aug 7th, '09, 11:55

One word. Awesome. :y:
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Re: New Snippet

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 13:48

Thanks bros
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Re: New Snippet

Postby BILI » Aug 8th, '09, 14:12

are you puttin album out or something cause I would love to hear it
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Re: New Snippet

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Aug 8th, '09, 22:18

Pretty good shit man, I'm liking it. The rhymes were insane, and your flow was on-point the whole song. But, like Sajjad said, without the lyrics right next to me, it would have been a little difficult to catch everything. You get that worked on, and you have pretty much a perfect verse here.

Can't wait to hear more, keep it up.
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