One Sided Love ( N.E.W )

[Slim Zaddy]

ok heres' my 3 track ,, i tried and i have done everything you guys told me in what we live for track , to improve on this track . so plz listen to it and tell me what do you think .....

heres' the lyric ::

There's a light in my eyes,
But it's too bright to see,
And a place in my heart
Where you used and still to be.
I guess I was wrong to believe
you were waiting here for me.
There's a light in your eyes,
But it's not burning for me?

I know you're tried your best
But that's not good enough for me
Understand, nevertheless
Love's gotta go both ways

Well you push me to the left
then you push me to the right
but you gotta meet me in the middle
If you wanna make this right

But you gotta believe....
So here it is, here it is, baby here it is....

I wanna help us out, tell you what it's all about
What I feel, what I need, how's it gonna be
So what you wanna do, what you really wanna do
'Cause I've decided everything i want from you

One sided love
Is never gonna work
So let me tell you something
That' I'm sure you've never heard of
Tender love and care what I need my baby girl
In case you're unaware
So I tell you what
Let me tell you where it's at
Hit me with your best shot


Well you push me to the left
then you push me to the right
but we gotta meet in the middle
If you wanna make this right

(rapping)
I'm giving you a second chance
But you gotta understand
If you don't know how to love me
I will find someone who can
So read my lips for the last time
I tell you now with no regret
if you don't get your act together
Even your name, I will forget
I'm always thinking what have I done
For you to say that I'm not the one
I've done everything I could
But love me girl, you still never would
I give you love, care, and even more,
And all what I get from you is ((I don’t know))
Baby I still love you, still have feeling for you
But in order for them to survive, I want you to be mine
I choose you from a million girls to be my wife
You’re my 1st love, come & be a part of my life,
Today I’m here, tomorrow I won’t be,
I will wait for you, till you wake up from your sleep,
I don’t know if you let your heart or your mind in choosing me,
It has to be both, understand love gotta go both ways,
Some day you will need me, but I won’t be living in your days,
So get your head straight up, show me some love, show me some care
Show me all you got; show me all I need, let us inhale our love in the air
You all what I got, you all what I need, but with love from one side we won’t succeed
I’m willing to announce you my wife from now, but, still I didn’t got what I need,

Well you push me to the left
then you push me to the right
but you gotta meet me in the middle
If you wanna make this right

But you gotta believe....
So here it is, here it is, baby here it is....

I wanna help us out, tell you what it's all about
What I feel, what I need, how's it gonna be
So what you wanna do, what you really wanna do
'Cause I've decided everything i want from you

One sided love
Is never gonna work
So let me tell you something
That' I'm sure you've never heard of
Tender love and care what I need my baby girl
In case you're unaware
So I tell you what
Let me tell you where it's at
Hit me with your best shot

Well you push me to the left
then you push me to the right
but we gotta meet in the middle
If you wanna make this right

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64921983d167fc0d/


All Feedback's will be returned

[Drama Setter]

lol at the flow and the accent dope , that was cool bro , keep it up .

[Slim Zaddy]

lol at the flow and the accent dope , that was cool bro , keep it up .

thanks man for the feed, much appreciated .. glad you liked it .. and yeah here i try to use a different accent lol ..

[D'Leh]

awesome keep it coming!!!!

[Slim Zaddy]

:y: awesome keep it coming!!!!

thanks homie ..

[Arabian Shady]

hmm well you ate quite alot of your words dude, like maybe its cause you wanted to keep the flow, i dont think singing is the right thing for you, know what i'm sayin? also your rap sounds loads different,lol none the less i know i could'nt sing or rap on a slow song, so hats off to you
Peace

[Slim Zaddy]

hmm well you ate quite alot of your words dude, like maybe its cause you wanted to keep the flow, i dont think singing is the right thing for you, know what i'm sayin? also your rap sounds loads different,lol none the less i know i could'nt sing or rap on a slow song, so hats off to you
Peace

first if all thanks for the comment man ,, but i did'tn ate a lot of words anyway ,, maybe you're talking about this line(( Some day you will need me, but I won’t be living in your days, )) its sounds like i did'tn pronounce well but nah its' just cuz of the mixing , i'm not professional , in mixing ,, and maybe here too
((still I didn’t got what I need)) here i said once the as it is , , then i just said it like this ((still get what i need )) well that was on purpose ,, other than these i did'tn eat any word ,

and talking about taking it as a carrier or something,, nah it's just a hobby and a relief ,, i study ,, so it's just a hobby of mine, and a way to express myself , and if i get successful then why not , i'm not losing anything , you know what i mean ,, and for my sound common man offcourse it's gonna sounds different cuz i'm not american , ... again thanks for the comment ,, much appreciated pal

[Arabian Shady]

hmm well you ate quite alot of your words dude, like maybe its cause you wanted to keep the flow, i dont think singing is the right thing for you, know what i'm sayin? also your rap sounds loads different,lol none the less i know i could'nt sing or rap on a slow song, so hats off to you
Peace

first if all thanks for the comment man ,, but i did'tn ate a lot of words anyway ,, maybe you're talking about this line(( Some day you will need me, but I won’t be living in your days, )) its sounds like i did'tn pronounce well but nah its' just cuz of the mixing , i'm not professional , in mixing ,, and maybe here too
((still I didn’t got what I need)) here i said once the as it is , , then i just said it like this ((still get what i need )) well that was on purpose ,, other than these i did'tn eat any word ,

and talking about taking it as a carrier or something,, nah it's just a hobby and a relief ,, i study ,, so it's just a hobby of mine, and a way to express myself , and if i get successful then why not , i'm not losing anything , you know what i mean ,, and for my sound common man offcourse it's gonna sounds different cuz i'm not american , ... again thanks for the comment ,, much appreciated pal

i know bro, no worries, i couldnt "sing" to save my own life,lol

whyat made you do a love song thingy?

[Slim Zaddy]

hmm well you ate quite alot of your words dude, like maybe its cause you wanted to keep the flow, i dont think singing is the right thing for you, know what i'm sayin? also your rap sounds loads different,lol none the less i know i could'nt sing or rap on a slow song, so hats off to you
Peace

first if all thanks for the comment man ,, but i did'tn ate a lot of words anyway ,, maybe you're talking about this line(( Some day you will need me, but I won’t be living in your days, )) its sounds like i did'tn pronounce well but nah its' just cuz of the mixing , i'm not professional , in mixing ,, and maybe here too
((still I didn’t got what I need)) here i said once the as it is , , then i just said it like this ((still get what i need )) well that was on purpose ,, other than these i did'tn eat any word ,

and talking about taking it as a carrier or something,, nah it's just a hobby and a relief ,, i study ,, so it's just a hobby of mine, and a way to express myself , and if i get successful then why not , i'm not losing anything , you know what i mean ,, and for my sound common man offcourse it's gonna sounds different cuz i'm not american , ... again thanks for the comment ,, much appreciated pal

i know bro, no worries, i couldnt "sing" to save my own life,lol

whyat made you do a love song thingy?

well i just wanna try to sing slow and fast , to see if i can just do it ,, and i love emotional songs... it's kindsa turns me on lol