Help Me Live

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/653291535a236049/

I come inside this life, with a mind that's intertwined
death and destruction, nothing, cinder bined
It's like I have to live, for me to go and die
see the flow and dive, inside the light I drive
pathetic in a sense, I can't live without the hate
you people spouting flavor, that's incapable to taste
like a fuckin' race car driver that's unable to race
like a fuckin' astronaught that can't be stable in space
It's a fable to taste, you bitches, fuckin' disgrace
while you ducking the case, I'm not buckin with sprays
it's intelligence that's fighting, it's not my lonely fists
only this will be the spit, you will listen to with
I'm a pacifist activist, like a boxer in football
can't help it if I'm bleedin, my inner hood calls
It's the nature of my being, and I'll never be safe
as long as letters are cased, I'll never better my face

Life a stepping stone to death, and I'm always falling on
when I slip and fall in water, I don't drown, I'm calling God
It's always odd to me, I got to be a fucking prodigy
rhyming lots of speeds, but the only speed I got in me
Is the pills I take, every single waking day
I'm taking days to say, decay my brain and fade away
I spit so I can live, this a rapper that can give
passion to the lonely cause' I've seen how it is
It's a broken heart, a spoken dart, a token of dark
see you opened with shards, shattered, broken with scars
followed by heavyness in ya chest, without rest
you shout this, WHY YOU DOING THIS, IS THIS A TEST?
When in reality it is, actuality exists
gotta search for it and negate all of shit
It's a test, misery loves company, remember that
if you don't, you'll remember this song, when you fall back...

[Arabian Shady]

you had a realli good flow goin on man, lyrics were dope,delivery was well placed as well liked the concept of the song , the recording of the second verse seems wierd like i dunno ,your rhymin from inside a bubble lol
nice song dude

[gutawafang]

Full marks.

[Jay-19]

Wow at this beat man! That is one amazing beat in my opinion!

Your flow improves by every track you drop man. It's really really good with a few really minor flaws.
Like one word too much in some lines, but fuck that, it sounds tight. But could be tighter.
Lyrics as always when it comes to you, are fucking top notch.
Mixing could be better I think. But it still sounds good.
I suck at mixing so I'm not really the one to give advice on mixing so...

Overall really dope track man!
Keep 'em coming!

[mcZu]

Besides the mixing and misspronouncing one word, it's dope.

[Slim Zaddy]

liked the beat ,, and track is good.. keeeeep it up