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NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

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NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 04:31

Requiem's lightside counterpart has made his first track.....

http://www.zshare.net/download/667856067e350a33

Verse 1

Patience is a virtue, anxiety’s a plague,
I can’t see straight cuz the world is so vague.
Searching for a light, we look up to a higher power,
But the only time we see Him is in the world’s final hour.
Critical debility of natural ability,
How can one function in this world of negativity.
Every possibility I use my agility,
And avoid hostility, that’s nobility.
So chivalrous, who will deliver us?
From this ignorance, malevolent belligerence.
Is it only through repentance that we gain admittance?
Or in the court of God is everyone defendants?
Will the world end, are we slated for destruction?
Will the ozone disappear from forest deconstruction?
Will fire rain down from volcanic eruptions?
Will the world turn to greed from govt. corruption?
I’m truly seekin answers, I aint searchin for pity.
If I wanted some of that , I wouldn’t be standin here spitting,
I’m admitting, the term Requiem’s now kinda fitting,
But it’s Stereo-Type, and if the world’s ending….


Chorus


Till I breathe my very last breath,
Till my heart gives out and I succumb to death.
If all that’s left in the world is a mic,
I’ll grip it tight, and rhyme through the night.
Till fire rains down from the sky on metropolis,
I’ll keep rhyming throughout the apocalypse.
If the words on my lips are all that I got,
One shot, I’ll spit till my heartbeat stops.


Verse 2

I can see the world crumbling, the kingdom has come,
I can hear the drums, but I don’t dare run.
I stand there stunned, my blood’s gone numb.
The sound of the guns, look at what we’ve done
Our very foundation, our own vitality
Has become our enemy, so has morality.
Realization of our human mortality,
Has led us into this truant mentality.
and I aint gonna stand for no passive aggressive,
fake hidden general subliminal message.
Some have a fetish for the world’s last visage,
But I’d rather die than live to see the image.
People are pessimistic like they hide out in shells,
Patiently waiting for the year 2012.
Let me tackle this touchy subject in which I’m about to delve,
If they don’t believe in a twenty thirteen then let them rot in hell.
I’ve said it once before, don’t make me repeat myself,
I’d rather die trying than live to see us fail.
The final gale, a fiery veil, how can we prevail?
If only we learned to respect ourselves, and not leave the world so frail.


btw, Requiem's answer will be coming soon... :shifty:
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Solace » Oct 11th, '09, 16:52

Notice this white guy who died his hair blonde just has to make a counterpart.

Oh yeah and he's an Eminem fan too.

Just kidding, this track was a 7.5/10 imo. Delivery was good. Mixing was really bland I was hoping for some overlays. The beat sounded too happy for the subject matter. Keep at it though.
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 19:02

Solace wrote:Notice this white guy who died his hair blonde just has to make a counterpart.

Oh yeah and he's an Eminem fan too.

Just kidding, this track was a 7.5/10 imo. Delivery was good. Mixing was really bland I was hoping for some overlays. The beat sounded too happy for the subject matter. Keep at it though.


thx for the feed man! and ROFL, i have alterior reasons for having a counterpart. one because Requiem's to damn hard to spell/pronounce. :)
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 11th, '09, 19:17

like the flow...altho it was very fast....i'd prefer a lil more slower flow,more smooth
hook was aite.....rhymes are kool no complains...lyrics overall decent :y:
but delivery could be improved work on that...
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 19:21

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:like the flow...altho it was very fast....i'd prefer a lil more slower flow,more smooth
hook was aite.....rhymes are kool no complains...lyrics overall decent :y:
but delivery could be improved work on that...
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thx man :y: i appreciate the feed, and i'm still learnin the craft you know :smoking:
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 11th, '09, 21:52

this is fun, very enjoyable

your voice is very high pitched, you can make it a lil more bassy in the mixing process

the beat is amazing, I think you showed it to me before, its real real good, but I don't think it fits the concept of the song tho lol

rhymes are crazy, flow is good but a lil chopped

delivery is excelent

overal, a good track :worship:
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Requiem » Oct 11th, '09, 23:07

Big Ax-D wrote:this is fun, very enjoyable

your voice is very high pitched, you can make it a lil more bassy in the mixing process

the beat is amazing, I think you showed it to me before, its real real good, but I don't think it fits the concept of the song tho lol

rhymes are crazy, flow is good but a lil chopped

delivery is excelent

overal, a good track :worship:


:worship: thx man! yea i understand where people are coming from with the beat not fitting subject matter. even tho i wrote it to the beat... but thx for the feed man :)
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby enjinn » Oct 13th, '09, 23:18

when i clicked on the link i only had the option to download the song...i cangt download it right now...is there any way you could just stream it from zshare?
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Re: NEW track "One Shot" - StereoType

Postby Requiem » Oct 14th, '09, 00:37

enjinn wrote:when i clicked on the link i only had the option to download the song...i cangt download it right now...is there any way you could just stream it from zshare?


http://www.zshare.net/audio/667856067e350a33
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