STFU pt. 3

[Mr. Chambers]

HAHA got you....but really....this is my second single......a story type track

http://www.myspace.com/t0mch4mbers

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66824594ee61accb/

Selling Short (produced by Sinima)


Lyrics

{Chorus}
i live for the day......
and i die for the cash
i know you don't care what i say//
i hate my life in every way
but i fight and i stuggle everyday
for the cream to be free.
i dunno why i stay//
{verse 1}
hi my name's mike.......N i fight to survive//
a security guard @ thirty...no light in my sight//
its just me and my wife in a studio apartment//
and it always seems like i'm losin out on parts which//
caused me to hit the bottle//
and its aweful.......cuz i'm put puting along when i rip the throttle//
i stopped caring for life....in fear that i might//
fail.....cuz the failures all i become accustom too//
my gears are grindin...my gas is fucked up too//
the point......my darkests fears are as clear as night//
can't look at this loser cuz it'll mirror the sight//
and i hate the grime that i hold so dear in life//
tired of bitch like we have it cheerful.....right//
afraid of being left so i veer off to the right//
like.....i'm living to die.....but diein on the inside//
so why not just let me die from this shit life//

{Chorus} X's 2


{Verse 2}
i stopped off from work.....figured i'd have a couple of drinks/
a couple to think of my life....a cup to get in sync//
a few beers to start off the process of reflection//
then i'll have a few more shots to get off that connection//
digesting my life....for what it really is//
sniff a couple lines of coke.....i'm starting to feel this shit//
fuck i'm in bliss....don't have a care in this world//
real life can't fucking touch me...not a fear in this whirl//
pool we call life....shit is spiraling down the drain//
in and out of conscienceness....the tyrants out the game//
drivin down the lane.....vision wavy as fuck//
got this pistol in my lap.....and this dame in my truck//
don't remember.........at the elevator to take it up//
fuck i'm blacking out i'm feeling shaken up//
throwin up........i'm good.......god its a war//
......can't think......knock at the door//

[gutawafang]

Love your voice and the dope delivery man. Nice.

[Solace]

fuck yes cant wait to hear it

[Solace]

Ive always loved this beat. Great track

[DƎRDYPK]

TOM FUCKING CHAMBERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My 2nd favorite track by you
behind "All Of Me"

[Xray]

You sounded mad emo on this lol. Chorus was corny and childish, and your delivery sounded abit bored, like you weren't comfortable with what your saying. I don't know but this song didn't show any confidence. And so many people use sinima beats, might wanna find some new beats.

[Mr. Chambers]

^i ain't tryna be a dick or sound like...kanyeish...but could you please explain a lil more.....pretty much just the chorus part........like...i don't do choruses alot.....but like i don't see how its childish or corny.....i could see what you mean delivery wise kinda cuz i hear it alot.............and i don't care who makes the beats...if its nice i'ma use it........it just happens that sinima makes beats that inspires me.....

[B.A.D.]

thats not from Sinima!!!... mafuckaz thats not their beat!!! cheatin bastards!!!
even if they sampled it, its an exact copy of Tech N9ne's "one good time"
which is originaly produced by: Matic Lee

that's not youre fault tho'... but... hmm Why the fuck would they do that??
I just lost all my respect to sinima

about your track..

I loved the story, good concept, the flow is good but doesn't match the beat, sounds like if you had it written before you heard the beat, still works tho

the hook, I didn't liked it a lot, you could add a lot more to it, sounds a bit empty

overall, good track, the concept is good, rhymes are nice, but at the end when the beat goes strange, with fades and shit sounds bad, really bad

good track

[Le Tunisien]

why the fuk is it called stfu pt 3 LOL, but anyways ...dope song

[Solace]

why the fuk is it called stfu pt 3 LOL, but anyways ...dope song

HAHA got you....

[Mr. Chambers]

thats not from Sinima!!!... mafuckaz thats not their beat!!! cheatin bastards!!!
even if they sampled it, its an exact copy of Tech N9ne's "one good time"
which is originaly produced by: Matic Lee

that's not youre fault tho'... but... hmm Why the fuck would they do that??
I just lost all my respect to sinima

about your track..

I loved the story, good concept, the flow is good but doesn't match the beat, sounds like if you had it written before you heard the beat, still works tho

the hook, I didn't liked it a lot, you could add a lot more to it, sounds a bit empty

overall, good track, the concept is good, rhymes are nice, but at the end when the beat goes strange, with fades and shit sounds bad, really bad

good track

it said something liek its a remake or something..............

got any suggestions for the chorus?......and thats what i'm aiming for @ the end..........cuz its gonna continue...yall will see........

[enjinn]

anyone who can write shit like this has skills...flow was good...hook was aight...this track was cool chambers...keep droppin!

[Mr. Chambers]

good look broski's................

[Steve Spag]

I'll read/listen to it on Sunday after I'm done recording my version on the beat, lol.

[Mr. Chambers]

mine FTW....................just joshing........maybe