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Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 17th, '09, 15:35

yo got an old track on myspace called lucifer junior, check it out and leave some feed, it is about 6 months old so it aint great i already no this lol

http://www.myspace.com/justicest16 :y:


any feedback wud be much appreciated
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby enjinn » Oct 17th, '09, 19:22

nice beat...flow was cool...i like the lyrics...reminds me of some eminem shit...hook is dope...not bad man, post some new shit
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 17th, '09, 19:23

huh for some reason i cant find your thread of your 3 tracks...anywayz

torment- decent lyrics....flow could need a little spice up....delivery sounded bored too..6/10

stop being a bitch- shit man....that beat....pronoucation was bad on this....but beat was :o

Lucifer junior- flow is good here...beat is :o again... :y:

keep working :y:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 17th, '09, 19:29

lol thanks alot, and yeah new shit will be posted in the near future and its alot different to this stuff, :)


oh and avoid stop being a bitch cuz i no myself that is wack, simply not my style, its horrible lol skip it
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Tash8 » Oct 17th, '09, 19:39

ur mixing quality is really bad.. but besides that everything was sickk.. flow was cool lyrics were nice
i liked the hook, felt it coulda been mixed better aswell but not bad
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 17th, '09, 19:41

thanks alot, and yh my prob with these is i rushed em a little, but am just showin what i can do before i drop fully finished shit :) glad u liked it :y:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 18th, '09, 12:03

Coleon wrote:the Justice who won scribble Jam? ...i think he was from Australlia so prob not




lol naa not me, never won a dam thing in my life lol
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 18th, '09, 18:19

yo can i just clear something up lol,


from the feedback, you guys are sayin that if i work ALOT on my mixin which i didnt even do before but now i no i need to so i gotta look into some producin skills, anyway if i mix good on my shit my songs wud be dope, that right? lol sorry its just feels good to no that i cud have the complete package if i master mixing cuz like i said i wanna make songs with the best on here, :b: :b:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Solace » Oct 19th, '09, 21:58

Yeah definitely if you improve your mixing cause right now its really bad. Might wanna get some good mixers around here to do some stuff for you. Fix that and your tracks would be pretty nice (yeah i checked em, im not talkin in general)
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 19th, '09, 22:30

you try to hard to be eminem.....from the one song i listened to.....from your content...to your style.....to your beat picking.........
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 20th, '09, 09:58

chambers wrote:you try to hard to be eminem.....from the one song i listened to.....from your content...to your style.....to your beat picking.........




from the song i no i dont really have a leg to stand on, but trust me am tryin my best not to be like him, but ive always been into horror and stuff too and i use lyrics like that, unfortunatly tho eminem does too, so i cant help that :(

am just doin my thing, and the beat lol i just liked it
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 21st, '09, 04:50

hahaha Lucifer Junior is pretty dope :worship:
drop some new shit!!! :smoking:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 21st, '09, 05:16

hey can you post a zshare link so I can take a listen? :y:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 21st, '09, 09:44

DerdyPK wrote:hahaha Lucifer Junior is pretty dope :worship:
drop some new shit!!! :smoking:





thanks alot man, and no worries, new shit on the way :y:
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Re: Justice - Lucifer Junior

Postby Justice » Oct 21st, '09, 10:00

Big Ax-D wrote:hey can you post a zshare link so I can take a listen? :y:





http://www.zshare.net/audio/67269662b1916431/

there you go bro :y:
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