Tornado- Raw (Version 1)

[Tornado]

New Shit! Surprise Bitches

Well Not Quite

This is a throwaway track from "The Restormation Series 1" tape i'm planning to release. This is early 09 shit for ya'll to enjoy cos i ain't posted shit since the tape. Also a chance for the newbies to hear my stuff without going through the shit that is The Storm LP Mixtape and for others to hear kinda new shit. As far as releasing shit goes, early 2010 is all i can say cos i'm not just planning a typical mixtape...Also, it's called Version 1 cos another version, which will be a single, is shitloads better. But enought talking

Artist: Tornado
Track Name: Raw (Version 1)
Album: N/A
Produced by: Tornado
Mixed & Recorded by: JMP

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No Lyrics cos i ain't that bothered with this

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

drums are a bit cheap....but melody is nice
flow is hot....did you punch in tho
mixing sounds pretty hollow...could be improved but not that bad either
lyrics from what i heard are De fuckin cent..
feel the underground style here...good one tornado

[Xray]

Lyrics are very hard to understand, cause of your London accent. But I did get 80% of the lyrics. Hook is dope, and the beat is dope but like rizzo said drums sounded cheap. The way you started the track was dope and when you started spitting it was fire. Flow is dope throughout its just that your overlays are all over the place and overall make it harder to understand what your saying. I know you didn't mix this track, your dj did if I remember correctly. You need to tell him to fix up your overlays man, its what makes your accent seem stronger then it is. Your delivery needs some work, specially the pronunciation, you slang to much. I feel you could do better delivery wise, everything else was on point. Downloading.

[Tornado]

Thanks for the honest feedback Rizzy and X. Keep It Coming

[Kez]

Beat is nice
Your flow was good for the most part but some parts it sounded a bit choppy
Lyrics are good for the track but there were parts i didn't really understand
Hook works
Delivery sounds kinda generic but it has a decent amount of energy i suppose

Decent song overall but i'm sure you have better

[mcZu]

Flow was a bit shaky at certain points, delivery was alright and the lyrics sound decent like rizzo said. Beat is okay, have heard better from you though. Overall not a bad song, keep 'em coming.

[Tornado]

thanks for the feed Kez and Zu, bump