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by Tha-Boy101 » Oct 24th, '09, 15:33
Song has been taken down
Last edited by Tha-Boy101 on Oct 25th, '09, 02:47, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Tha-Boy - What Has Happend
by classthe_king » Oct 24th, '09, 17:47
Like the beat, your quality is pretty good. Flow and delivery are alright, could be better but not bad. I prefer fast rapping over slow rapping but whatever is good. You need to work on your lyrics though, rhyming was extremely basic, I like the subject matter in the lyrics you just need to step it up a little bit with the rhyming. 
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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