Emcee Zu - Tired

by **mcZu** » Oct 26th, '09, 21:40

Recorded this one last month. Already got some feed on MSN from some people, so thanks again to those who fed. Feedback is appreciated.

Emcee Zu - Tired

by **classthe_king** » Oct 26th, '09, 23:39

Ayy, can you send me the instrumental for this? I think this is alot better then your last verse. Quality is better, flow is better, delivery is alot better. You only had a couple slip ups. The main problem i still see with it is your voice. It sounds really weird for some reason, but you can't really help that

. Big improvement though.

by **mcZu** » Oct 26th, '09, 23:42

classthe_king wrote:Ayy, can you send me the instrumental for this? I think this is alot better then your last verse. Quality is better, flow is better, delivery is alot better. You only had a couple slip ups. The main problem i still see with it is your voice. It sounds really weird for some reason, but you can't really help that . Big improvement though.

Haha, thanks, it isn't really an improvement 'cause it's old. And I know, I recorded this one when I had a cold, my voice was kinda weird :-k

I gotta control my voice, lol.

And I'll send it to you on MSN :y:

by **classthe_king** » Oct 26th, '09, 23:55

lol haha oh, well maybe the cold was it. And it was still better!

by **B.A.D.** » Oct 27th, '09, 03:20

I love the beat, where u got it from???

you got a very very diferent style, I like that man, if you perfect it it will be amazing, but yeah its good

very short track :n:

I like it

by **Big Proof 4ever** » Oct 27th, '09, 10:55

feels like u were very very focused,u have to relax man and flow with the beat,keep practising work on ur delivery,my advice to you is write one verse,and keep recording it every singe day,dont waste ur time and energy on other rhymes,focuse on one :happy:

by **mcZu** » Oct 27th, '09, 20:51

Big Ax-D wrote:I love the beat, where u got it from???

you got a very very diferent style, I like that man, if you perfect it it will be amazing, but yeah its good

very short track

I like it

If you want PM me.

Thanks for the feed man, appreciate it. Next I'll drop something longer. :b:

Big Proof 4ever wrote:feels like u were very very focused,u have to relax man and flow with the beat,keep practising work on ur delivery,my advice to you is write one verse,and keep recording it every singe day,dont waste ur time and energy on other rhymes,focuse on one

Thanks for the feed man, appreciate it. :b:

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