Don't You Know (Prod. By Me)

[Tash8]

Don't You Know (Prod. By Me)

Listen:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/67671522330ca7ee/

I'm staring at the clock, watching time tick by
I'm thinking of the day when I make it big time
when you'll see me on TV, rockin one big smile
and you'll stop in amazement and wonder what If I?
if you just hadn't left me and hadn't said goodbye
we'd be livin' so large and had superstar lives
but you had to go and ruin it and put me on the side
now it's your biggest regret, I bet, oh well
and I'm over the hell that you had to put me through
I'm better off alone, I'm completely done with you
I'm sorry you didn't know that I'd turn so beast
I was always like this I just had to be unleashed
you thought I'd wait for you so you put me on leave
I guess you were wrong now the only time you'll see me
is when you turn on your TV and your eyes get teary
and you'll never get past that, I get the last laugh, clearly

*chorus x2*
Don't You Know?
i'm a superstar
Now I Live
live so large
Go Ahead Try
try to find
Someone like I

[MC Anonymous]

The flow was a lil choppy do to speeding up and slowing down. The delivery was a bit clear and it was better then your previous work. I think the beat is dope as fuck. Your chorus on this is nice as fuck too. 8/10

[classthe_king]

Beat was dope. Lyrics were good too after hearing them rapped. Your flow sounded perfect over this beat IMO. The delivery and quality sounded good but with my personal taste i didnt like the poppy way you rapped everything. Thats just me though. Like i said when you posted this on cw, loved that last line.

[DƎRDYPK]

you sound pretty dope spitting on your own beats
the lyrics you brought to your beat was pretty sick...had a smooth steady chill vibe
your flow is improving too
I heard the track you posted on here before & this is way nicer that that
stay dropping audio homes
i'll be sure to listen

[Xray]

Beat sounds very Tash amateurish, I kinda remember this beat, I think you made this last year or something? Whole beat needs heavy EQ'ing and compressing. Your delivery is fixed, your voice didn't have that funny sound this time, sounded mature and upgraded lol so good job on that man. Flow was pretty much perfect, and the lyrics were crazy for real. Hook was pretty good, but you singing was funny to me lmao sorry man but you sound mad gay on them high notes LMAO.

[Tash8]

thx gyys

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

intro has nice ass mixing on it...
flow was up and down..as anon said..you speed up then go slow then speed up..
delivery is okay..cant complain....
and hook a lil lil lil volume boost

[B.A.D.]

that you tash???.... your voice sounds very diferent

this is an amazing improvement... the biggest jump I've seen anyone on the site take.. sounds great now
mixing is excelent, flow is flawless, you best flow so far. lyrics are simple but good, can't complain about them

the hook is good, catchy... I like it... nice singing haha

def. a great track, shame its only one verse, but it good nonetheless...

[Tash8]

^ thanks, dont worry abou tonly 1 verse.. i'll be doing a second and third verse, now that i have more shit to talk about.

[Tash8]

bump

[Tornado]

To me, beat could do with livening up yaknow..Your voice sounds mad different every time i hear it, either that or weed's taken it's toll on me..either way, better flow, delivery and lyrics from last time, just thought there could be more emotion on it, just a bit but a nice short track overall