Up-N-Comin

[iDEA91]

I'm an up-n-comin rapper out of the midwest, missouri to be specific. I haven't done anything real serious yet, I just bought my mic the other day and have been recording since then. Please listen n give me constructive criticism and what not. It's called "Make Way" and my myspace is www.myspace.com/homegrownrecordsjmo if you wanna check some more stuff out from me and my friends. But here it is and the lyrics...

Future.mp3 - 2.21MB

Lyrics:

Intro: Homegrown, 2009
This is the end all to be all,
ya understand what i'm sayin,
This is it, This is the Shit
and this is legit,
So pay attention,
...Bitch...

i'm so lost, caught up in drama,
don't wanna face it but I think I gotta,
I think I got a way to make this pain go away,
cuz this place is a place that I don't wanna stay,
make way, I got alot to gain, ya can't
take it away, you ain't puttin out the flame,
I came a long way, and tomorrow is today,
won't borrow no more change, i'm ready for a change,
I got my gun heavy keep it steady when you aim,
cuz the only one I got feelings for,,,, is mary jane,
you ain't been there when it rains, ya ain't seen the tears that came,
you've never been ashamed, this games never been the same,
I'm better than the greats cuz i'm clever when I bang,
This beretta don't shoot blanks, when i'm aimin for your brain,
i'm not the one to blame, but you won't forget my name,
everytime you spit a line, this is mine, this is fate,

So here we go with this motherfuckin flow,
one more time so you motherfuckers know,
who the greatest is, what I spit is basic shit,
I reside right beside where them pimps and players is,

[when I die, i'll be sure to leave a fuckin legacy,
just wait and see, fuckin haters hatin me,
you can't get on my level, with this bass and this treble,
I'm a modern day rebel, spittin shit off of the temple, 2x]

I'll explode like a motherfuckin bomb from saddam,
ring the alarm, got you in my palm, my name is king kong,
i'm armed, and I don't know what the fuck i'm on,
my head is gone, but somehow i'm still head strong,
you were still dead wrong, thought it was easy,
you couldn't be me, believe me, not even briefly,
ya need me, can't see me, too fuckin greedy,
last name gonzales, and the first names speedy,
why you even speakin, do you believe in demons,
do you wanna see one come over and cover you in semen,
fuck demons, fuck this mic and fuck the whole human species,
diseases decease no need to fit the pieces..

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Not bad. More multies would be nice though.