Lost Jay-19 tracks...

[Jay-19]

Some of you might know that my computer crashed and burned worse than the Hindenburg.
But I managed to get a hold of some of the finished tracks I had on it, that were gonna go on my EP.
I thought I'd upload 'em for ya'll since I'm starting all over with a new EP and completely fresh tracks.
The mixing on them might be a little different since it's mixed by dudes I know all over Sweden, and I gave them free hands with the material I had recorded. So the EP was kinda like an experiment where I tried different things, and let people mix them however they wanted since I suck balls at mixing.

Jay-19 - Let Us March
http://www.zshare.net/audio/680304233a2754f1/
Tried to do a gangsta rap track with this one, don't know if I succeeded with it though, that's up to you.

Jay-19 - Underground (We Are The Best)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/680309776dedd57f/
Tried to capture the whole feeling I had about the game and how the underground artists usually are lyrically superior to the mainstream rappers.

Jay-19 f. Amaze - Might Go Bad
http://www.zshare.net/audio/68031075097b2ece/
Just a sick, twisted track featuring my friend Tom (Amaze) about being completely out of your mind.

Jay-19 - Allting (Everything)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/68031227f787e1df/
Was not supposed to be on the EP, but thought I'd upload it too if anybody wanted to hear me rap in Swedish for exchange.

I don't think anyone of you guys have heard these tracks before, so tell me what you think and give me some constructive feedback so I can improve with my fresh EP to make it the best it can be.
Will start recording again as soon as I get money to buy a new computer.

Thanks in advance!

[Jay-19]

Come on guys... somebody got to have at least something to say, right?

[B.A.D.]

Let Us March-

at first seemed like to be a deep track, cuz of the beat, but you managed to turn it diferent, I liked it, your quality sounds studio pro... the hook... hmm... I think you could had got someone to sing something behind it... "Fuck jack the ripper, I will rip some jackers"... love that line... good track

underground-

excelent concept... and I agree 90% with you on this, there are some parts that hmm, dunno... beat sounds KA, I like it.. dark and underground plus it fits your style at 100%... you got an excelent accent for being swedish.. ... again hook... could use some gangsta singing... some nate dogg shit hahahaha... but its good anyway, verses and lyrics are excelent... great track

Might Go Bad-

I don't like the beat, its original but hmm lol, strange hahaha.... your flow shines on this, underground mafucka!... seems like hooks its not your thing hahaha, again hook wasn't my piece of cake... verse 2 was my favourite, that was you or amaze???... you sound very similar... I think he was on verse 3 tho' hahahaha.... nice track, I liked it

Allting -

beat is nice, good choice... its nice... I don't understand nothing, but I like the dark delivery, can't say much on this one, but I like it ...

Overall..

one word too make this simple: PRO

[Tornado]

Let Us March

Song sounds empty as fuck, beat is ok but don't feels full. Your Verses are great, especially your lyrics. The ripper line enjoyed that. Chorus isn't catchy but not horrible if yaknow what i'm saying..Overall, it's a kinda boring song because of the beat thought you were solid in your performance..6/10

Underground (We Are The Best)

Beat is crazy man, much better. You sound in your element here, i can here your emotion on this, crazy lyrics man, love it even more cause i can relate to it aswell. This is the best song i've ever heard from you, except the chorus and ending...def 9/10

Might Go Bad

Beat sounds low quality, but i like the originality of it, reminds me of Watch Dees. Dark and weird as fuck, loving the vibe. Your vocals are a little low but thats the only fault in either of your verses and had the best chorus of the 3. Amaze came good on the beat, again the vocals are too low and he lacks your potent delivery you posses. Overall a 8/10

[_Ironic_]

Not gonna feed them all..but I'll preview a few

Let us March
Delivery is nice..definitely feelin it on this track..lyrics were tight..flow could use some work though for sure...Chorus is HOT..that's the one thing usually lacking on this site with people..they don't have the ability to make a catchy hook..but you did this one justice...the jack the rippers line was nice and unique so props to this..overall this song could use some work with the flow...it just seemed choppy..but your voice is pretty smooth.. NICE TRACK (dunno about the gangsta shit though)

Underground
I wanted to listen to this cuz I thought it was a interesting concept
LYRICS ARE FIREEEEEEEE.... again your voice is very enjoyable...your flow just isn't right man..like you sound like you have a ton of talent, but its just so choppy...like it doesn't connect right..I dunno if you're not punching in right or what..delivery is great... I liked the scheme flip in the second verse "yap yap yap" part that was improvement on flow..if you could keep that type on your tracks your flow would be tremendous.. NOT feelin the hook on this..could use some work..its not bad..it's just not super catchy...to really add to the concept of the song..you should make the chorus catchy...cuz really that's all mainstream rappers have..you know what I mean? show people that you can lyrically kill them..yet make the song catchy at the same time..

Don't think I've checked any tracks from you yet, but I can say im impressed..good work man, I'll look out for future threads from you. keep doin it cuz you got talent. rtf if u can bro, i'd really appreciate it.

[Vettori]

Good shit dude, If i were to edit these theyd be fuckin awsome, haha your Very on point. and thats hard to keep doin, especially if yu like to play with ur flow, You could be writing sumthing Thats supposed to have a topic, and just go off of it very easily, but you didnt. Well i guess im speaking on half of "Underground" I Listened to the first two, and The chorus on the first is actually pretty dope. Coulda sounded a bit better I heard a spot that yu tried to sing, but gave it up quick,, next time Follow threw add some more Details. Maybe umm Some yelling in the backround or just some stuff to fill in the blanks, cuz with a beat that doesnt have alot of sound in it, it sounds very plain, so hard to follow "flow wise" Great shit tho, Not checkin the other two till maybe later im headin out now... But yee cant wait to see what ull bring on a mixtape

[Jay-19]

Thanks for all the feedback guys! Greatly appreciated!
Yeah, I think it's hard to make a catchy chorus, so I know what you're saying.

Ax-D, that was me on the 2 first verses and the hook on "Might Go Bad", really glad you liked it!

Once again thanks, I'll take this feedback and use it to get better!

Cheers dudes!