College

[Tash8]

my friends are making this song, so i decided to drop a verse on it.. i'm second verse, friend is first, other friend is hook..

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6806140729ef52d9/

my lyrics (wrote and recorded in 20 min):
we call it freshman year, cause we're fresh when we get here
we're thinking about now, forget about next year
we're always getting faded, thinking about a lady
devicing a plan, how to get in her pants
smoke so much weed, my body's growing plants
girl im looking for a meaningless fuck
would you care join me, i'm thinking, why not?
it's only for a night, it's only one life
what do you have to lose, quit putting up a fight?
i told you girlie, i'm really good in bed
i can be so wild and give good head
i got a few friends, who are ready to party
so bring out the beer, vodka, and bacardi
mix a few drinks, and let's get it crackin
cause this is UCSC where the good shit happens


they ain't supposed to be complex, this is jsut a fun song.

[B.A.D.]

Everyday I'm hustling hahahaha

- hahahaha verse one is cool, amateur but I like it, reminds me of my old days ... needs a flow fixing hahaha
- that's the hook???? well it sucks hahaha
- damn, you shine on this.... kinda like eminem did on forever... the lyrics are hahahha, asher roth nice verse tash... but the whole track overall needs to be structured lot of empty spaces n shit

but like you said, this was made for fun , so can't complain about it.... nice verse man

[Tash8]

thanks bump

[Xray]

Your verse was good I guess, but the overall track was boring. Intro = fucked up.

[_Ironic_]

Intro mixing was..off to say the least..coulda been better

1st dude Delivery was below par, you're rapping about nothing that many can relate to..your flow fell off at a few parts..not really feelin this..lyrics were weak, and production was nothing to brag about.. basically it SOUNDED like you wrote and recorded it in 20 min.

2nd dude was much better..more enjoyable to listen to...flow was nice, and delivery was cool, mixing could use some work.. I dunno, if it wasn't for this cat, I woulda rated this 4/10..

overall 7/10 keep workin at it...

[Tash8]

Intro mixing was..off to say the least..coulda been better

Delivery was below par, you're rapping about nothing that many can relate to..your flow fell off at a few parts..not really feelin this..lyrics were weak, and production was nothing to brag about.. basically it SOUNDED like you wrote and recorded it in 20 min.

2nd dude was much better..more enjoyable to listen to...flow was nice, and delivery was cool, mixing could use some work.. I dunno, if it wasn't for this cat, I woulda rated this 4/10..

overall 7/10 keep workin at it...

i was the second dude?

[_Ironic_]

Intro mixing was..off to say the least..coulda been better

Delivery was below par, you're rapping about nothing that many can relate to..your flow fell off at a few parts..not really feelin this..lyrics were weak, and production was nothing to brag about.. basically it SOUNDED like you wrote and recorded it in 20 min.

2nd dude was much better..more enjoyable to listen to...flow was nice, and delivery was cool, mixing could use some work.. I dunno, if it wasn't for this cat, I woulda rated this 4/10..

overall 7/10 keep workin at it...

i was the second dude?

I've never heard u rap before..so i figured u were the first dude...(my bad)
but yeah bro, take what I said about the second dude, you MADE the track, like I said if it wasn't for u, then this song would be horrible, take it how it is bro, you did a great job.