[NEW] Sajjad ft. MC Anonymous - Only Know What U See

[Xray]

GUESS WHO'S MOTHERFUCKING BACK! Jeaaaaa, back with a song at last, this is the first joint I've made for my mixtape, word I'm working on a mixtape, no title as of yet, but I'll keep you all posted once I have more info. First single, so check it out!! Props to Anon for the verse!!

Only Know What U See

-Intro-(Sajjad)
Uh huh, yeah, yo
Blitznext, ahuh, MC Anonymous
Yeah Sajjad is motherfuckin' back, yo Anon lets get em

-Chorus- (Sajjad)
At times might seem
things you never know
shadows in dreams
you still just don't know
your creepin between
shook as lightening
what it might be
what it might seem
open your eyes
still no sight
shadows at night
close em, its like
you don't wanna know
but you still gotta know
cause you only know what you see
so don't fuck with what you don't know

-Verse 1- (Sajjad)
rappers talk gats, but only burners they grasp
is a bunsen burner, in the fucking science lab
when we clashin' you cough, I'm a kalashnikov
quick give this bitch a tissue cause he soft as fuck
playin games got him thinking like he lara croft
I'll put you in your tomb, cause this faker, raider caught
verbal essence of my presence, now this pussy up in heaven
for lettin' faulty semen in another homos ass n
now his changin intersections, cause I mashed him' and he wingin'
like homophobical passions will ever let him past it
talking soldier like, only time when you be marching
is when your calenders open, and its past february, right?
talking explosives, homie your motives is Showbiz
and what the fuck is Showbiz without an A.G?
now focus wordage, I bond no bandage
007 with no companions

-Chorus- (Sajjad)

-Verse 2- (Sajjad)
their scared to give birth to beef, no pussy spared
put a brick in a labourers head, and call it a pregnancy test
tech-no? fuck no, thats like saying n9ne blow
and that's like saying a grenade can't flow
but you ain't understandin', rhyme like a cannon
my flows like a damian, hell on a pad 'n'
my pattern is simple, crash when I'm landin'
stereotypical, of me to come blastin'
S is iranian, so fuck who you "ran in"
and your just askin', who heist'd our cash in
cold is catchless, but fire is capturin'
when sajjad is rappin' my closure is endless
never ending sentence, my english is bad and?
no veteran, I dont help pets grow
I help them diminish-in', original flow,
you copy from the teachings, I'm clinically dope so

-Chorus- (Sajjad)

-Verse 3- (MC Anonymous)
To be updated.

Download/Listen: http://limelinx.com/files/dd78ed0e15b6c ... cfe6121f6d

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

sajjad is back!...yes
chorus was panned right but the overlays were out of place in parts...
and the idea of the flow is actually pretty good..so beside the overlays...
verses were solid..but i dont know your voice sounds tired out...
lyrics are sick from everyone....beat is dayme!
you anon kept up well..but the experience difference was stated...
to anon once again...you flow sounds like some karate movie...smooth it out
pull a jackie chan movie instead of a bruce lee movie....(hmm do i loose track )


[guess who's motherfucking bacccck!]

[Le Tunisien]

i love the chorus

[DƎRDYPK]

HOLY FUCK
that track left me speechless
you guys murdered it

[Drama Setter]

Dayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyymn , fucking awesome , I was waiting for a new track from you sajjad and yeah when Anon joins of course this will be the most Dope shit , tnx both

[_Ironic_]

peepin

chorus is cool, not great..could use some work but the energy was definitely there so

verse 1)flow was fire, and lyrics were pretty tight and they were felt.. delivery was sleepy, not really feelin it...I dunno it just doesn't fit in with the flow and lyrics

verse 2)STARTED OFF REALLY PROMISING and then kinda fell off as it went on...you didn't came up the same energy as when you started..had me noddin at first..perfect flow/delivery/ and emotion

verse 3) anon was super hype on this..definite improvement on delivery here...it seems like his time away was effective cuz he really upped not only his quality but flow...lyrics are there as always..but the emotion of this was a breathe of fresh air so big props to that

overall pretty dope track..nothing that had me go WOW, but rather got me to listen and head noddin...replay value wasn't as high as expected for this collab though just some technical issues with delivery and such but other than that a very solid track from sajjad and anon.

overall 8.5/10
keep droppin, this was still pretty damn dope.

[B.A.D.]

Holy muthafuckin fuck!!!!!

damn, this is one of the best tracks I've ever heard... the hook... Its good but i don't love it, the idea is nice tho', but seems like there was a little flaw on the timing when mixing it down..

verse 1 is the best of the song, flaw is flawless, rhymes is ill, a lot of lyrical gravitiy bouncin, I love it, plus the beat fits a 100% on this

verse 2 still great, I like the first one better, but this was also amazing, excelent job!!!... pure sickness I love it

verse 3 annon gots a great flow, diferent, I like it, another superb verse, loving it, plus I can see that sajjad mixed this one, makes it sound perfecto!!

overall: this track is a BOMB!!!, hot beat, hot verses, hot flows, hot lyrics, my favourite verse was the first, Sajjad rip it!!! Mc Anon did an excelent collab verse for this... nothing else but sickness

[B.A.D.]

*knocks on Sajjad's butt*

hellooo .. ? big ax d .. you up there .. ?

u got a problem with me or something?

[B.A.D.]

i was joking, no i have not got a problem.

you are overrating the track though. it's good, but it's not "one of the best tracks ever"

btw, "flaw is flawless" you mean flow, right?

and please, could you POSSIBLY dickride him a bit less? try sounding like a proper music critic, instead of a groupie, then it might come across as less gay.

just my two cents.

you don't respect opinions do you?
so If I don't have the same opinion as you, I am a dickrider??

and yeah, I typed flow wrong... whats the big deal about it?

[Spyder]

damn shit gave me nuts cancer

i loved the hook, i was hooked right in when it started off with that.
Sajjad both your verses are crazy man i love the flow on it and the lyrics are great
anon didnt have the best quality but stepped up for it in lyrics.
sajjad had the delivery and flow on this one

production here is great, loved everything about this track

9/10

[Solace]

Very good track. So glad you two finally collaborated! Great beat choice. Hook was alright, hated the last 4 lines of it; thought they were really damn gay. Verses were fine, 'cept for MC Anonymous' verse I really disliked the echo and would've rathered some overlays and for the vocals to be louder cause the track is loud and banging then you hit MC Anon's verse and it's softer. But his verse was still dope as fuck, and I felt it shined here. And damn 320kbs, good job.

[Xray]

Major Props for the feedback from all. Glad the majority enjoyed it.

i'm gna give my honest feed.

the chorus was nice, it had me singing along to it the second time nice concept to it too. i'd give it an 8/10

verse one - the flow was nice, the voice was nice, i lol'd at the bunsen burner line, i've not heard that word since i was in school. what's a kalashnikov? i didn't like how you pronounced laura croft's name wrong though. maybe it was the aussie accent, i'm not sure. this verse had nice wordplay and name play, which stood out to me. i didn't like this line though "for letting faulty semen in another homo's ass" it just seemed to not fit in with the subject to me. overall it wasn't that good lyrically, i thought it lacked internal rhymes, and the multies were soft, i like to see more FIRM multies, rather than abtsract rhymes. your flow and voice saved this verse imo. i'd give this verse a 6/10

verse two - again, the voice and flow saved the verse. lyrically, this verse was pretty bad. the rhymes were extremely abstract. but i liked this line "put a brick in a labourers head, and call it a pregnancy test" that made me lol, i saw it in anon's msn pm the other day too lol. nice. i don't know man, i like track's that have a strong subject, or tell's a story, this track just seem's to be random rhyming and stuff. with no firm subject chosen? this verse scored 5/10 for me.

verse 3 - i knew straight away that this verse would be the first to save the track, straight from the off, i preferred your flow over sajjad's and your voice was pretty dope too, i've not heard you flow like this before, but the first 4 lines had me thinking, "damn" this was a good verse. this verse is the verse that made me play the track again. then on the third time, i skipped to your verse, which tell's me that you killed this track. good thing you were at the end. you had much more multies and internal rhymes. i'd give this verse a strong 8/10.

overall, as a track, it was good, but to me, not worth hearing again. i'd like to hear anon make a whole track using that flow tho, i'd defo cop a copy of that. overall 6.5/10 anonymous saved the track.

How can my lyrics for both the verses be not that good lyrically if its packed with wordplay, punchlines, and metaphors lol? Ima explain the lines abit more incase you didn't get them.

"when we clashin' you cough, I'm a Kalashnikov" Kalashnikov is the original name for AK-47, aka the Russian name. Wordplay/punchline. "Quick give this bitch a tissue cause he soft as fuck" metaphor. "playin games got him thinking like he lara croft/I'll put you in your tomb, cause this faker, raider caught" Wordplay, punchline. I spelled it Lara and pronounced it Lara because in Australia and America we call it Lara, not Laura. "It is said the original name for Lara Croft was to be Laura Cruise. It was later changed to Lara Croft due to the fact that an American accent would change the pronunciation of "Laura" to "Lara", and that "Cruise" didn't sound British. Because of the alike pronunciations, she is sometimes referred to as Laura." < From Wiki, so sorry I didn't pronounce it in British for ya. "Talking soldier like, only time when you be marching/is when your calenders open, and its past february, right?"Wordplay, punchline, metaphor. "Talking explosives, homie your motives is Showbiz/and what the fuck is Showbiz without an A.G?" Wordplay, Showbiz and A.G. are a oldschool rap duo. "Now focus wordage, I bond no bandage/007 with no companions" Metaphor.

Second verse. You got the first 2 lines so lets move on to the rest. "tech-no? fuck no, thats like saying n9ne blow/and that's like saying a grenade can't flow" Wordplay/metaphor. I made a reference to Tech N9ne while saying I dislike techno, that's lyrically bad? "But you ain't understandin', rhyme like a cannon/my flows like a damian, hell on a pad 'n" Damian is also a devilish name as well as a normal name. So wordplay. "My pattern is simple, crash when I'm landin'/stereotypical, of me to come blastin" Pad 'n'/pattern, aka wordplay/metaphor. "S is iranian, so fuck who you "ran in" Punchline/wordplay. "and your just askin', who heist'd our cash in" Wordplay. "Cold is catchless, but fire is capturin" metaphor. "when sajjad is rappin' my closure is endless/never ending sentence, my english is bad and?"Metaphor, and the last bit I meant people often say Rappers got bad english. "No veteran, I dont help pets grow/I help them diminish-in', original flow/you copy from the teachings, I'm clinically dope so" Wordplay/punchline. I meant I don't like copy cats, and wordplay on teachers pets. So to say my verses were lyrically bad is a insult because I had probably 1-2 lines that were fillers, rest were either metaphors, punchlines, or wordplay. And that's what I focused on in my verses, not multis. So your saying its lyrically bad cause I didn't have firm multis? lol that's like saying a Lloyd Banks verse is lyrically wack cause he doesn't use much multi's either. So your point is invalid.

Props to anon for that verse, and keep the feed coming.

[B.A.D.]

it wasn't WHAT you said, it was the way you said it.

and how does that bother you??
this is not even your song,

but well, what can you do for an arrogant englishman

[Xray]

*commits suicide*

Fuck you for comparing me with Lil Wayne and shit. I find that comparison beyond retarded/doesn't make sense, cause Wayne goes around saying the dumbest shit ever. Come on man I'm not that retarded. Aight it's your opinion but for real though, why do you act like this is an album? I haven't made a full song in AGES and I didn't have a concept in my mind at the time, so I just wanted to kick rhymes, but its aight its your opinion, just take that Lil Wayne comment back I'm sure everyone agrees with me that, thats fucked up.

Need more feed, come on people.

[Slim Zaddy]

got nothing to say ,, but fucking dope,, glad u back , SaJJad, , keep the work ,, up ,, i liked everyhting in it,, except the chorus .. cuz not my type ,, ,, cool track ,, 9/10 ,,