Justice - Angels can wait

[Justice]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/688452069fe2688e/


all feedback appreciated, i wrote this when i was feeling down, so its true emotion, mixin ive been workin at, so i hope its better than it first was, and yh hope u like it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice emotions indeed....also your overlays seemed mixed well
hook is very nice but also boring after a while idk just my 2cents
lyrics are real..i can tell nice work man...
only downsides are the boring beat and the hook which gets boring real quick
technical is was a good performance tho

[Justice]

thanks man, lol the beat is a dj ironik song called stay with me lol but thanks man appreciate it

[DelinQuent]

beat is outrageous, good pick.

i disagree with the overlays being mixed well, they're a bit too loud, not bad though.

lyrics are dope, i feel this. rhyming is basic, but that's what i like. Emotion seems a bit lacking IMO, but it's not bad.

second verse the flow is a bit weird in the start. gets better as you go in. lyrics are good on this verse as well. love how both verses ended, classic.

lyrics are sick at the start of this verse, love it. i've noticed emotion is a bit better here as well. this verse was great, hands down the best in this song.

overall 7/10 due to lack of emotion at the start, lyrics were great thru the entire song. good shit man. buy a better mic, this song would have been even better with better quality.

[Justice]

thanks alot delinquent (sorry if spelt wrong lol)


yh i agree with you on everything you said there, thanks alot for the feed, and i too like the 3rd verse more , and deffo gotta get a better mic and a mixer dont worry i no all this lol, am gettin there slowly thanks alot,

oh and the dude who wants the lyrics i'll pm them too u later

[Justice]

thanks alot scott, appreciate it to the fullest

[B.A.D.]

I love the intro, the beat is excelent, great choice... damn, this is the kind of beat I have been looking for... amazing choice

quality is good, could be improved... but its good

the lyrics are fire, flow I dunno... seems a lil boring for me, still works good... I love the gun at the end of first verse... plus that sample in the hook is excelent...

the emotion is good, nice one that

the flow improves big time on verse 3, big ups on that

overall the whole track is really nice... the thing I can suggest on here is maybe you need to work on the delivery, I know its good but you need something to difer your self from the rest, I mean your voice sounds to predictable for an underground rapper... need to work on that to make a unique and unreplaceable delivery.

keep the good work up, looking forward to more music from ya

[Justice]

thanks big D, i been waitin for some tips on improving, and am sure in time i will find myself fully, delivery wise and stuff, so stay with me thanks alot for the feed

[enjinn]

beat is nice...i love songs like this...i can really relate to it...really feeling the lyrics...im looking forward to hearing more from you

[Justice]

thanks enjinn, and i am really glad you said that, cuz when i do these songs i do them with true feelings, so that people can actually listen to it and say 'i no exactly where this guy is comin from' so thanks for the comment am glad you liked it,

[_Ironic_]

beat is fuckin weird dude. word. weird.

with that said, it takes way too long for the song to start

not really diggin this too much, no complexity or real creativeness. try working on your multis, and especially a rhyme scheme. that said stick at it bro, keep tryin.

[Justice]

appreciate it ironic

[Slim Zaddy]

thanks alot delinquent (sorry if spelt wrong lol)


yh i agree with you on everything you said there, thanks alot for the feed, and i too like the 3rd verse more , and deffo gotta get a better mic and a mixer dont worry i no all this lol, am gettin there slowly thanks alot,

oh and the dude who wants the lyrics i'll pm them too u later

pm me te lyric too ,, ilike to listen to the songs,, with the lyric,,


Edit : your intro is sick man ,, i liked it ,, i mean the girl voice that u used,, beat is very nice, it's kinda fit to ya voice and ya lyrics,, i liked how you flow over it , and your delivery was cool i can tell that you felt what you sing and this what's makes it cool , lyrics are touchy man ,, 8.5/10 good job ,, hoime

[EminemIVLife]

Sample is very nice (beautiful even) and beat is perfect for it: your lyrics are heartfelt too Your flow just needs a bit more polish and work but with your lyrics I'd say you have alot of potential. Those lyrics are very personal and I definetely appreciated them

[Justice]

thanks alot, appreciate all the feedback recieved, very glad most of it is positive aswell, thanks alot to u all, dont worry i will return the favour and feed all yours too