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Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

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Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

Postby shade45staff » Nov 27th, '09, 17:11

i'm improving my english by rappin'

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[Eminem Intro]
Shade 45....Let's go!

[Shade45staff]
yeahhhhh
TRSHADY
YOU GOT A NEW MAN

choco cake,pumpkin pie,JaxMc,bumpin' beats all night
yeah,right,2-0-0-9,i gotta lots of friends and a beautiful wife
i'm gangsta,you are too wanksta,stay away from me pranksta
this is it,this is me,or this is you
you're not my girl,but i still calling you my boo
don't think i'm too bad,cuz it's too sad,this definition is too wack
you know,it's time to blow,it's time to show,some skills
poppin pills,i can climb hills,show you what's real
Shout out to Trshady,Shout out to the Ladies,that's my type
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Re: Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 27th, '09, 17:22

fuck was that lol..you mainly need to work on...everything....plus fix your quality...cuz it hurt my ears...flow was all over the place...lyrics were simple...up your vocabulary...aand delivery..umm work on voice control then you start soundin more confident and less...like sounded right now :unsure:
so yeah.... :sweating: long way to go buddy...good luck
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Re: Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

Postby shade45staff » Nov 27th, '09, 17:31

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:fuck was that lol..you mainly need to work on...everything....plus fix your quality...cuz it hurt my ears...flow was all over the place...lyrics were simple...up your vocabulary...aand delivery..umm work on voice control then you start soundin more confident and less...like sounded right now :unsure:
so yeah.... :sweating: long way to go buddy...good luck

thanks man..i wil lwork to fix it..thx
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Re: Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

Postby neversnooze » Nov 27th, '09, 17:58

I agree with Chris , everything needs work. As for mixing, look up some tutorials on google. With practice I'm sure you'll start making good music.

keep at it :happy:
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Re: Shade45staff-"Right 2-0-0-9"

Postby Drama Setter » Nov 27th, '09, 18:23

Work more
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props to Coleon and DarkBlade
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