Sajjad - New Verse (Preview) (Produced By Me)

[Xray]

Place was free so I was recording this earlier till my fam got back home so I couldn't finish on. This is half of the verse, I made the beat as well so let me know what you think on both the verse and beat. First time I post a track on here that's produced by me lol so need to know whats the deal.

In a strict, ultra social life, cornered post
guards a mixed, coastal vocal at strife, born to curse
In a universe worse than an illusional search
comes a deep deserved, to serve, opposite to Perth
5 Peeps in hes fam, out of reach in this land
out of region he stands, 5 seeds of a damned -
Tree, then expands to 6, he's movin ranks
but these fits don't fix, so he slowly disbands
He's changin his shoes, learning values and rules
old habits defused, swervin-no-casuals
Lookin at directions, he's lost and confused
so he's hooked-to-intersections, only to frost and consume
Lurkin around, kids he's age with cars and jewels
he don't give a fuck though, he calls em fools
He's constantly hatin, nerves lack the patience
no occupation, he lives through dedications.......

http://www.limelinx.com/files/cf0e6750a ... 8e5bf521ac

Enjoy.

[Requiem]

it's always good to hear new shit from you...

the beats pretty nice... i love the pianos... the drums are good


ur flow is pretty smooth, around the beginning i think you slurred a word or two. but other than that nice verse/lyrics.

good shit man... keep dropping when u can

[Robbie G]

I'm sorry dude but I just didn't care for that. The beat was nice but I didn't like your voice on it and I couldn't really understand what you were saying.

I'm not sure what it was...I'll listen to it again later because it might just be the mood i'm in.

[Mr. Chambers]

give me a verse over this beat....now.....bitch....

[Tornado]

Beat is nice, kinda vibing shit i can bump to yaknow..delievery was abit to aggressive and you slurred your words, heavily at the beginning, picked it up and had 1 or 2 other slips nearer the end, makes it harder to understand but atleast the lyrcis was there. Everything else was ok, lyrics were dope btw

[Tash8]

beat is dope, the first 8 bars of ur verse are wack, just straight up wack, u can't pronounce it properly so you're kinda using an accent.. after that it just flips the script, the last 10 bars or so are dope...u need to memorize ur shit, it sounds like ur reading too much

[Vettori]

this was interesting actually.. the odd time ur flow went off, But i actually did like the way it sounded haha... lyrics were okay. ur delivery stood out to me, maybe a little more passion or aggression
and it could have a nicer feel .... Beats dope too hahaa

[classthe_king]

Lyrics were sick on thise but i wasn't really feeling the delivery. You kind of slurred everything together, couldn't really understand it.

[Xray]

Alright thanks for the feed everyone. Like I said I got disturbed while recording so this wouldn't of been my final choice of recording if I had more time to record.

beat is dope, the first 8 bars of ur verse are wack, just straight up wack, u can't pronounce it properly so you're kinda using an accent.. after that it just flips the script, the last 10 bars or so are dope...u need to memorize ur shit, it sounds like ur reading too much

Nope. Not using an accent on the first 8 bars. Using my natural accent, and I don't know what the fuck is going on with my accent to be honest. At times I sound a bit American at times I sound Australian, it's just fucking weird and it pisses me off.

[Big Proof 4ever]

Beat is nice, kinda vibing shit i can bump to yaknow..delievery was abit to aggressive and you slurred your words, heavily at the beginning, picked it up and had 1 or 2 other slips nearer the end, makes it harder to understand but atleast the lyrcis was there. Everything else was ok, lyrics were dope btw

this is exactly what i wanted to write nukka

[Tash8]

Alright thanks for the feed everyone. Like I said I got disturbed while recording so this wouldn't of been my final choice of recording if I had more time to record.

beat is dope, the first 8 bars of ur verse are wack, just straight up wack, u can't pronounce it properly so you're kinda using an accent.. after that it just flips the script, the last 10 bars or so are dope...u need to memorize ur shit, it sounds like ur reading too much

Nope. Not using an accent on the first 8 bars. Using my natural accent, and I don't know what the fuck is going on with my accent to be honest. At times I sound a bit American at times I sound Australian, it's just fucking weird and it pisses me off.

yeahh maybe that was it... i think its cause u switched between ur australlian accent and american one that it sounded weird.

[Nu Syd]

flow is nuts, beat is simply amazing, the older sajjad accent is a must here!

* whoooo kid *

BRING IT BACK!!