NEW STEVE SPAG - Raining Comets (Throw-Away Track)

[Steve Spag]

I was planning on using this as the intro to the "Ready Or Not" LP but since I've stepped my game up since the last couple months I've decided to scrap this song. As always, any/all feedback is appreciated!

Steve Spag - Raining Comets _mp3_.mp3 - 1.78MB

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[Spyder]

ILLUMINATI FTW

i liked the track man, it was wierd for me your flow. like every fourth snare it was doubled
and that was the only time when your line ended on the snare. but u made it work man
u ended everytime on that double so props for that

beat is good for me, wasnt to complext, it was a chillin beat kinda which is what i like

lyrics are good man, alright subject to touch upon. but had some nice mutlies and some funny parts in there(illuminati)

delivery is alright for me, course i like the more anger delivery but, i liked it man deffinitly didnt bring the track down

8/10

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like the little intro "thank you for choosing spag airlines" lol


liyrics i reall like, some good lines in there. flow is really good, but the writings is what im impressed by when i listen to this..really like the way you structured the whole think, the beats nice and you go across is very nicely.


good track man i aint checked out alot of your newer stuff so my bad man, but this is a good track great rhymes imo and the overall writing is great aswell.

we never been on track together man..that needs to change

[Emadyville]

Intro is great haha

Rhymes are ridiculous, loving how you flowed on this, shoulda been switched up a little just because it gets a little boring which is something I just really started to focus on when I'm writing cause I'm all about the rhymes as well and I learned that trying to keep the same rhymes going is great but gets boring if you use the same flow with it. I loved this track tho, delivery I think coulda been a little better, which I've told you before cause I feel all of your tracks always have a commonality in how you sound. But rhymes were dope, the structure of how you wrote this was dope, content was sick, just those few things I think could get worked out. For a throw-away track this is real good tho lol, loved the ending btw with the outta breathe shit. Good work

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the positive feed guys! And yeah Emadyville I know what you're saying about the voice, which is why I decided not to officially release this track. I recorded this about 2 and a half months ago and I've been working really hard since then.

Again, thanks for the opinion's, keep 'em coming!

[Brandon S]

really fuckin sick song man

[Mr. Chambers]

good shit dunny...the delivery was nice..the flow was good...lyrics were cool.......overall good shit 8/10

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks a lot guys!

[Tornado]

Intro was kool and intresting, your steady on this beat, but this still sounds monotoney to me, lacks energy, cos to me, you could go on that beat for 5 minuites, it'd bored me, nothing intresting jumps out, very average for me 5/10

[classthe_king]

This was dope and if this was a throw-away track then i can't wait to hear the album. Everything was dope, delivery sounded a little tired at some points but other then that it was sweet.

[Steve Spag]

Damn, thanks for all the great feedback guys! MUCH appreciated (as I'm sure you already know)...I'm heading back to the studio SOON, so expect a lot of NEW material!

[Nick. Y]

Interesting flow,plus I like the beat