Just now seeing all this love!! Thanks guys I appreciate it
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:liked everything, except when you just used the real lines from it but flipped a little but, also couple bars here and there had the except same rhyme structure as on the real track aswell.
you did great for what you did, but i would have liked it to be more original.
Well using the same rhyme structure was kind of the point, i was flipping his verse, as in doing it like him but putting my own twist on it... my twist was mostly jus change of lyrics and some times rhymes all together... but thanks for the feedback
Nick. Y wrote:The lyrics are great,I see you can cope with the fast flow,but at the last verse you're flipping it too fast and your voice is making it sound very strange.Anyway I liked the song

Hmm, yea i know i was doin it a lil faster than what he did at parts... I actually kind of liked it better that way... n i really dont know what to tell you bout the voice thing lol