40 Bars-Vettori

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/69441301f9de8e1d/



just a quick thing i put together.... Lemmek now how you feel about it, Slower then average.. really know scenario to put it..



Lyrics



lets do a hundred, Flexin my tongue, with the breath of abundance
Stretchin my funds, Sketchin a ton, Set to be done
i mean i try to stop the process but it lept from my lungs
Slept like i hung down next to the sun
try to see when it's gonna Rescue me from,
wrote 2 differant ways, and it Left you with None
You always try to kill it,get me get yu a gun
F-U and stepped on ur Fun, no n needed , want the stress
to be one, hell of a mess ,make a record with Dumb
effort Except, to errect from the Dumps,
applyin pressure silent gestures slept right through to Spy on Hecklars,
pull it on me, your insurance better register your Head first
sever, every clever mc who feels he's got the best heard
shit, but its only shit, I do it with alot less effort,
get you on attackin me, In hope that what i might of said hurt
you forevor, pull the lever, release upon every letter
Touch on subjects that make Some people twitch, and resorting back to Bed work
In hopes that it gets better, ur a joke i think so NEVER
wreck the mic when opertunities get to stick in ur web
lift a single thing, flip the finger hater ,way quicker then lead
waste of a line in my head, rather wait, goodbye and your dead
id rather spit my fire at someone who is at a Higher end
am i ur friend, if yes im offended by the Cave i am in
Come pull me out, naw fuck it ill try myself. Survive with a Pen
I got saliva to spend, think ill apply a new trend
id rather live a bum outside,then live alive in the Pen
Where you would Cry with the men, A little more silent then them
makes u a target and they come and supply you with Endless
amounts of trys, where there is rust in there lives
yea they were once in this world with us,now there adjustin there Flies
discustin and wise, to think theyd never wanna go back,
on the streets several weeks later, turtles lie on there back
Live from iraq, they cut a guy in half, his eyes and his back
his bodys like a rubix cube they think theyll slide it right back
if i had it whack, then what yu call whats happenin here
there really livin in that struggle, and im askin it clear
at least i recognize whats rough and dont get by with a crutch
use somethin to lie about and Try to make its size out to much
Music is shy, someone should tell this world to fly on a bus
an expression that makes u better understand, ur mind it just sucks

[Solace]

Ha shit dope. Though the mixing was pretty blah. Wish the delivery was a bit better though...You just sorta sounded like you were talking. Not your best imo. Dope lyrics, and the flow was pretty nice. I enjoyed it.

[Vettori]

thx yea, it wasnt meant to be a bumpin song, just some Lyrics ..helps me get better with this kinda stuff, and with how slow it was it was hard to be Emotional, just difficult. I could do better but i dunno it yet.. just wrote it. thx for tha feed

[Vettori]

BUUUUUMP!

[classthe_king]

I thought this was dope. The lyrics were great and the kind of hardcore delivery made the song worth listening to again imo. Flowed nice to.

[Vettori]

Thx man, woot a comment haha

Not to many ppl on tr anymore. i guess i was away a long time

[Mr. Chambers]

not bad

the lyrics were nice...as was the flow....the delivery liek some said was kinda....just there......and the quality was just kinda average...but overall it was a cool song...i wasn't feeling the beat much tho

[Vettori]

yea , it was more a practice thing. than a song.. lol thx for feed

[Le Tunisien]

the flow was there,delivery was ok,lyrics are good...overall ,it was a cool song i liked it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was good man, i heard more profesional songs from ya but the 40 bars were good lyrics were nice, flow was there as always, good track man

[Vettori]

yee, thx guys...the songs im recordin now are of this quality.. its just rough copy songs.. untill i re-record em Better... Just need to study em