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Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 5th, '09, 04:47

This isn't a new track... seeing as i don't want to spoil the new shit i'm working on....

but this was the first time i went to the studio.. first time learning the equipment and punch-in yada yada. it's a pretty decent track, a few flow fall off's but lyrically this puts me a few steps past The Death Tape...

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LYRICS



Verse 1

Break into a palace, then drink from the Judas Chalice,
My mind is filled with malice, welcome to Wonderland Alice,
Hannibal Lector with a canine injector,
Spilling blood faster than botanical nectar.
Shove an animal up a cannibal’s rectum,
Expand his mandible like a mishandled dissection.
Open a cranium with a titanium drill,
Ur brains’ll be spilled, like a channel and chilled.
Sold to the highest bidder, at a child center,
A baby sitter, with a mild taste for a vile dinner.
Am I a sinner, witcher giving cancer to a fan presenter.
Where’s my manners, hang a dancer like a banner picture.
Which man is sicker, candle licker or the Swastika
Swastika, drink a malt liquor, go figure poor it over Britney Spears younger sister. Hickery dickery dock, Writhe like the dyin Spock.



Verse 2


Jamie Lynn, Oh I missed her. On that Nickelodian show, why’d it have to go, dropped like a mal aimed free throw
If she had stayed on her knees, she woulda been outta trouble,
Now all she can hope to be is Britney’s stunt double.
Lindsay on a frenzy, like the evil last mimzy.
Henesy from Tennesee is menacing these flimsy teens.
Exstacy is next to speed, I guess that’s how they spread the seed.
It’s just a mess to bleed, that’s why the killer fled the scene,
I’m meant to be mean, when there’s flesh to be seamed.
I’m keen to see ur head reamed in a machine,
Pristine is this knife it gleams, like headlight beams.
On monster wheels, that ran over your girlfriend, all in heels.
Alcoholic filled, she’s a fallen meal to truckers amerin for roadkill.
Stuffed in the automobile, and turn the sick mode ill,
Like the Norman Bates Motel, leave ur heart cold still.




Verse 3


Sedistic, I’m twisted on the edge of cataclysmic.
Seismic activity when I blow up the psycho clinic.
Off the rickter scale, when I picked up Christian Bale,
Threw batman in a black van, sacked like the NFL.
Sick as hell, not the joker, actor aint a facter,
I create scars, but it aint no laughin matter.
William Shatner meet my pet velosca raptor.
Kirk will get murked, in the priceline massacre.
Acupunture, bagg ur mother after she had ur brother,
I’m a mad mother f*cker, better run at the sound of thunder.
Duckin under covers, nothing will save ya, no savior,
Xaviar maybe your next on the shady turn,
Fatally burned, ashes placed in ur baby’s urn,
This what he earned, spread on the family fern.
“Where’s daddy?” little Sadie slurred, mother didn’t hear a word,
She’s busy hackin into her husband’s saved reserves.


Chorus

Terrible crime, hysterical rhyme, make u lose track of numerical time
Mankind’s decline, I don’t need a damn sign.
Stand high, u don’t wanna let the chance by,
Show me the light, I’ll introduce it to the dark,
Have it fizzle to just a miserable spark.
At heart, I’m just a part of this sick little art,
Ready on my mark, make the world fall apart
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Vettori » Dec 5th, '09, 04:53

beat is cool, dramatic, but u force threw ur flow,..i like ssome of ur flow at times, But then u say sum things that are just random :p

slow it down a tad

follow the beat Directly.. if u find ur falling off, u may need to shorten lines, or lengthen others ... interesting...
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 5th, '09, 04:54

Vettori wrote:beat is cool, dramatic, but u force threw ur flow,..i like ssome of ur flow at times, But then u say sum things that are just random :p

slow it down a tad

follow the beat Directly.. if u find ur falling off, u may need to shorten lines, or lengthen others ... interesting...


thx for the tips dude.. it'll definitely help for my upcoming stuff.... but i'm not going to do fast as hell beats very much.. this one proves why :8)
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Solace » Dec 5th, '09, 04:55

Word you did this shit like 4 months ago, why havent you released it sooner?

The chorus of this song>this song
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 5th, '09, 04:56

Solace wrote:Word you did this shit like 4 months ago, why havent you released it sooner?

The chorus of this song>this song


i've been busy as fuck in college dude :(

and yea, one of my best choruses.... wait till u hear my upcoming shit :shifty:

EDIT: also it's because i'm like Dre and i sit on my music :sweating:
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Solace » Dec 5th, '09, 04:57

Requiem wrote:
Solace wrote:Word you did this shit like 4 months ago, why havent you released it sooner?

The chorus of this song>this song


i've been busy as fuck in college dude :(

and yea, one of my best choruses.... wait till u hear my upcoming shit :shifty:

I dont want to hear you shit. :'(
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 5th, '09, 04:57

Solace wrote:
Requiem wrote:
Solace wrote:Word you did this shit like 4 months ago, why havent you released it sooner?

The chorus of this song>this song


i've been busy as fuck in college dude :(

and yea, one of my best choruses.... wait till u hear my upcoming shit :shifty:

I dont want to hear you shit. :'(

don't spam my topic nukka...

and believe me.. it'll be the best shit you ever heard :o take it how u will :whistle:
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby classthe_king » Dec 5th, '09, 20:37

Where have i heard this beat before?

The track is pretty good. Flow and delivery are great although i don't really like the voice. Deffinately better then mose of your last album.
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Solace » Dec 5th, '09, 22:43

classthe_king wrote:Where have i heard this beat before?

The track is pretty good. Flow and delivery are great although i don't really like the voice. Deffinately better then mose of your last album.

There's an Eminem remix in the Eminem section using this beat.
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 5th, '09, 22:48

classthe_king wrote:Where have i heard this beat before?

The track is pretty good. Flow and delivery are great although i don't really like the voice. Deffinately better then mose of your last album.


hey thx man :y:

and i can't help my voice :(
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '09, 00:38

Requiem wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Where have i heard this beat before?

The track is pretty good. Flow and delivery are great although i don't really like the voice. Deffinately better then mose of your last album.


hey thx man :y:

and i can't help my voice :(


lol its all good. Reminds me of a young eminem :o

@ solace, which one?
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby classthe_king » Dec 6th, '09, 00:44

Hmmm i had never heard of that though...Has anon ever used it?
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 00:45

classthe_king wrote:
Requiem wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Where have i heard this beat before?

The track is pretty good. Flow and delivery are great although i don't really like the voice. Deffinately better then mose of your last album.


hey thx man :y:

and i can't help my voice :(


lol its all good. Reminds me of a young eminem :o

@ solace, which one?

np homie ;) and just because i'm short white blonde got blue eyes, and rap doesn't mean i'm like eminem :shifty:
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Re: Mankind's Decline (First Studio Visit)

Postby Solace » Dec 6th, '09, 00:53

classthe_king wrote:Hmmm i had never heard of that though...Has anon ever used it?

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