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Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Emadyville » Dec 6th, '09, 20:41

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Lyrics:
D. Dubs:
I used to smile a lot but it’s upside down,
like this world that I see it now matches this frown,
and I’m not one to cry so as rain hits the ground,
I’d rather drown in that than have these tears around,
so now I’m surrounded by this love I found,
but there’s no girl here and now I don’t feel sound,
like I gave some my heart just to have it crushed more,
so I know I’ll live once but have died much more,
and this hill that I’m climbing does not have a peak,
so with my eyes closed how do I know what I seek,
see I know that I’m me and for some I am weak,
but if they tried to kiss me now I’d turn another cheek,
cause look- we have all been there,
but no one but myself could be this sincere,
so if you ain’t listen to your heart I’m glad,
cause you were bad for me when I’d of been the best thing you ever had…

DelinQuent:
They say listen and you learn, guess you learn by getting burned/
See there ain’t much to earn, what I’ve learned is it ain’t worth/
The heartache and the pain, the hardest part is waaaaking/
Up every day, lookin at a face/
Knowing that you’ll never have, and all the time you spent on that/
You will never have it back, feel like no one has ya back/
And when you think you’re fine, she comes runnin thru ya mind/
And ya back to square one, i say love is random/ Like ya never know what you have till it’s gone/
And them I’m gone, yeah going, going, gone/
Thought we was going strong, I guess we was going wrong/
But ya kept me in the dark, don’t dare say we couldn’t talk/
Phone goes both ways, mine never rang/
And I think it’s lame, that I hold the blame/
And you are still my jewel but I’m sick of foolish games/
Listen to your heart? Fuck that it’s lame/

D. Dubs:
Now there isn’t much left of me to upset,
I've been put through the wringer and haven’t dried just yet,
see, she was a failure-or maybe much less,
but I stayed by her side and hoped for my success,
and was stripped of everything like I had to undress,
and I’ll respond just the same ask if I’m done yes,
I was stuck between a rock and a hard place,
a catch-22 wanting you makes the scars ache,
and now my heart-I guess the prognosis,
is positive, I worked it into fibrosis,
caring too much being blinds the diagnosis,
the door was ripped from the hinges but I’ll close this,
even though it hurts more it’s the thorn in the roses,
and I suppose this had to be addressed these words are the postage,
and to forget you at night you will never know the dosage…

PRops to DQ for the mixing and feature on this, all feedback is greatly appreciated :y:
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby mcZu » Dec 6th, '09, 20:55

Vocals sound a lil' too low. Dubs, your delivery is dope, especially the emotion in your voice, flow is on point in both verses, though, at the end of your third verse, it sounds like you were forcing it. DQ, your delivery is dope as well, great emotion in your voice, and your flow sounds on point, though, sometimes, it seems like you to are forcing some rhymes. Lyrics are good, deep and filled with emotion, I enjoyed listening to this song. It kinda inspired me to write something to the same beat. Good job, guys.
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 6th, '09, 20:58

this beat is amazing...just a real classic
nice delivery guys..lyrics were kool
flow's were nice and smooth....3rd verse its kinda shaky at parts...
lol@the failed loop :whistle:
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Emadyville » Dec 6th, '09, 20:59

mcZu wrote:Vocals sound a lil' too low. Dubs, your delivery is dope, especially the emotion in your voice, flow is on point in both verses, though, at the end of your third verse, it sounds like you were forcing it. DQ, your delivery is dope as well, great emotion in your voice, and your flow sounds on point, though, sometimes, it seems like you to are forcing some rhymes. Lyrics are good, deep and filled with emotion, I enjoyed listening to this song. It kinda inspired me to write something to the same beat. Good job, guys.


Thank you man :y:

I'll pm you the beat incase you wanna use it :y:
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Emadyville » Dec 6th, '09, 21:00

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:this beat is amazing...just a real classic
nice delivery guys..lyrics were kool
flow's were nice and smooth....3rd verse its kinda shaky at parts...
lol@the failed loop :whistle:


Thanks = :y:
and thats how the beat was :shifty:
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Tash8 » Dec 6th, '09, 21:06

damn dude

i just wrote some lyrics that say

they listen to your heart, then blah blah

iw ish you'd asked me to be on this i woulda murked it!!!
i'll feed the song in a bit, brbbb
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Emadyville » Dec 6th, '09, 22:34

Tash8 wrote:damn dude

i just wrote some lyrics that say

they listen to your heart, then blah blah

iw ish you'd asked me to be on this i woulda murked it!!!
i'll feed the song in a bit, brbbb


Well that's just a fuckin coincidence haha

And thanks :y:
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Tash8 » Dec 8th, '09, 07:13

hey man i really can't use myspace to listen to the song, could u do me a favor and up it to zshare, i really wanna listen to it.
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Tash8 » Dec 8th, '09, 07:39

wow man

"They say listen and you learn, guess you learn by getting burned/
See there ain’t much to earn, what I’ve learned is it ain’t worth/
The heartache and the pain, the hardest part is waaaaking/
Up every day, lookin at a face/
Knowing that you’ll never have, and all the time you spent on that/
You will never have it back, feel like no one has ya back/
And when you think you’re fine, she comes runnin thru ya mind/
And ya back to square one, i say love is random/ Like ya never know what you have till it’s gone/
And them I’m gone, yeah going, going, gone/
Thought we was going strong, I guess we was going wrong/
But ya kept me in the dark, don’t dare say we couldn’t talk/
Phone goes both ways, mine never rang/
And I think it’s lame, that I hold the blame/
And you are still my jewel but I’m sick of foolish games/
Listen to your heart? Fuck that it’s lame/"


DQ i could relate to that soo much.. it felt almost as if that's what i was thinking.. so props on that

but yo all three verses were dope, i think my fav techinically is the third one but i enjoyed second verse most cause it related it... good song, i wish i coulda dropped on this...

flow was really good from both of you, delivery could have used just a bit more emotion, at times it felt u guys whispered... but it was a good song, i enjoyed it.. keep it up, and if u guys can, listen to my song "Memory Lane" thx
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby Emadyville » Dec 8th, '09, 07:41

Thanks Tash, def appreciate the feed :y:

And I'll check your song and feed
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Re: Listen to Your Heart Feat: DelinQuent

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 9th, '09, 07:32

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you could relate tash.
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