My first 2 beats on FL9

[cityfan31]

Would appreciate any feedback. cheers.

I wanted to make a beat that eminem could be a serial killer on:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/697289138fcab9a1/


and this one i dunno:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/69729271f82978dc/

[Jens14]

Nice for first two beats.

[Vettori]

Beat two i liked outta the two... hmm some of it seems to simple.. definatly needs more life to it,

Chorus on beat two(bullshit)- I think was all over.. u gotta make the chorus spots simple enough to let the artist work with it.. and Try differant things... maybe some more sounds here n there throughout the instrumental to keep it soundin differant.. weather it be a chime at one time.. or like a very dramatic 4 bars worth near the end of the verse spots.. to hype it up for the chorus.... Just keep fuckin with it.. and im sure ull be making sick beats in no time

[cityfan31]

Beat two i liked outta the two... hmm some of it seems to simple.. definatly needs more life to it,

Chorus on beat two(bullshit)- I think was all over.. u gotta make the chorus spots simple enough to let the artist work with it.. and Try differant things... maybe some more sounds here n there throughout the instrumental to keep it soundin differant.. weather it be a chime at one time.. or like a very dramatic 4 bars worth near the end of the verse spots.. to hype it up for the chorus.... Just keep fuckin with it.. and im sure ull be making sick beats in no time

yeah man i know what you mean. I'm alright at gettin the basic stuff but then i run out of ideas like of what to put in to make it more interesting..... I prefer the first beat but thats probably cos i made it this evening in a couple hours so its fresh in my mind

Thanks for your input anyways !!

[Vettori]

do you write on ur beats.. or beats period....do u rap ?

if yu do it helps you with producing..alot, with figuring out melodies.. and chords u cant hit , yu can avoid making those sounds that are out of ur reach, and just overall u can figure out what sounds better... i call it an upper hand.. I wouldnt know how to produce if i didnt know how to rap... helps with placement of drums, and even other sounds you should put in the backrounds dramatics.. make the beat tell a story first.. then an mc to pick up from there

still keep at it man