Redzek - Find A Better Lie !

[Le Tunisien]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/697515812ce3aa4a/

follow with lyrics:


[Intro]
You Love Me? well me too i guess...Yeah

[Verse 1]
you a girl with no heart
the world is so dark
when you pulled me apart
then you fooled me so hard
i'll play my last card
so fuck your fast car
sex was the best part
Ex!cmon lets start
you said i aint smart?
i'll let your pain spark
remember "insane park" ?
for no vain we argue
so hoe when i go
yo ego wont grow
oh no,no more!
what the hell do you know
about the motherfukin show
i did when i was witchu
i was there to snitch u
now its time to switch you
bitch you,better fuck off me
never say that you love me
why'd you put him above me
you aint nothin but a slut
im somethin,im a mutt
i'll bust in your butt
bitch trust my nutt
you must pass my lust
what the fuck do you want?
what the fuck is goin on???
yeah i lost and i won
oh you miss me??cum on!

[Chorus]
you fucking hoe better find a better lie
you shouldnt have done that no matter why
i loved you bitch now i prefer to cry
i prefer to die,its only fair to try

[Verse2]
to hide away and Dry like a tear cuz i
thought you was perfect,we'll never get to work it
im nevervous,cuz i just saw what the dirt is
you did it on purpose,now see what to hurt is
you lilttle fucking dwarf,you aint even that good
you asked for a date ,i was in a bad mood
maybe bored i accepted,you adored!i expect this
i ignore what the fact is,u hoe with no respect bitch
so please dont phone me,you dont know me,i aint lonely
but you are,so dont call me,how's like to be phony?
u dun back the fuck up,u'll get smacked the fuck up
we both know its fucked up,no more "baby wussup?"
you dont need to suck up,you'll bleed,locked up
cuz baby i love you,its crazy,i hate you
to play me;you loved to,u'r shady n fake too
im the one who made you,n you thought i was faithful?


[Chorus]
you fucking hoe better find a better lie
you shouldnt have done that no matter why
i loved you bitch now i prefer to cry
i prefer to die,its only fair to try

[Verse 3]

to get high...in this pain i survive
said u'll love me untill the day u die
and as far as i know you'r still alive
and concernin a revenge baby i will arrive
cuz you took me for a joke,hoe you smokin coke
oh my heart you broke,i hope you fucking choke
said i was rude?but i wasnt in the mood
i'll diss you on the hood, now does it sound good?
do you feel horny?n if thats the case then
go masturbatin,our love?im erasin
assination?>bitch you ll be facin
damn you cant even look at me on my face when
you know i'll slap ya,i got no patience
in me,so releave me,im mad so believe me
im creepy,bitch why'd you even deceive me?
Shit is so deceiving,i wouldnt be recieving


[Chorus]
you fucking hoe better find a better lie
you shouldnt have done that no matter why
i loved you bitch now i prefer to cry
i prefer to die,its only fair to try

[Outro]
you fucking hoe better find a better lie...
Better Lie....
Better Lie....
you fucking hoe...you FUCKING HOE!

[Nu Syd]

o_o someones mad

[Vettori]

Qualitys crap, but that aside.. i liked this haha, meant sumthin.. some rhymes were there strictly to rhyme i could tell.. . But some deep stuff, and the chorus if done properly could sound awsome... Keepo at it man, maybe somehow fix up ur quality... get a condensor mic, + a good recording program, (cool edit pro) (adobe audition) w/e just make sure it has the proper tools in , for mixing

and i cant tell if you had adlibs on this... if so, remember "the worse ur quality" the Less voice dubs u want.. cause it jumbles the clarity, makes it hard to understand.. good shit man

[Le Tunisien]

Qualitys crap, but that aside.. i liked this haha, meant sumthin.. some rhymes were there strictly to rhyme i could tell.. . But some deep stuff, and the chorus if done properly could sound awsome... Keepo at it man, maybe somehow fix up ur quality... get a condensor mic, + a good recording program, (cool edit pro) (adobe audition) w/e just make sure it has the proper tools in , for mixing

and i cant tell if you had adlibs on this... if so, remember "the worse ur quality" the Less voice dubs u want.. cause it jumbles the clarity, makes it hard to understand.. good shit man

thanks alot man for the feedback,really appreciated homie!

[Nick. Y]

Lyrics were deep and smartly written.I guess you should practice more with the flow and when you get yourself a proper mic ,you'd do a lot better so keep pushing

[Slim Zaddy]

quality is not perfect ,, maybe cuz of da mic,, but i can see that ya lyrics,, are fire,, i liked the beat, it sounds,, good,, you flowed,, good to it ,, delivery was cool man , only the quality that ruined it for me ,,other than that i enjoyed it ,, good drop homie

[Le Tunisien]

thanks nick and slim zaddy! thats really appreciated