Full Of Anger - Slice

[Slice]

my new song "full of anger"

http://www.myspace.com/slizzle88

please give me a feedback

[Vettori]

horrible beat choice.... horrible beat in general... seems like yu have some lines, that can be good.
but this beat didnt help showcase that...and it didnt sound like the name of the title..couldnt tell u were angry,

No flow on this, u need some work dude..

structure, Flow, Syllables, and definatly a better producer, cause this sounds all over the place...

Just work on it more, im not downsizing yu. just lettin u know



"its kinda Dreamin" was definatly better... enjoyed it more could actually understand it

[Slice]

ok thx for feedback.

I will work on it more

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

who do you used for production ? at the start its better to go for soundclick beats there just eisier and there's lots of them to help you get better on. work on your flow try right you lines and syllybyles to fit in the bar to make them flow better.


keep working at it, we all start somewere

[Slice]

thanks, ok i'll check out the soundclick beats

[_Ironic_]

you should respond to other members music before you post your own so that people are willing to leave you feedback..since you're new..people gave u feed..but if u try to drop a track like this without giving the same courtesy to fellow members who drop audios..nobody is gonna respond..

..with that said
I liked nothing about this song..and you need ALOT of help. sorry. but it's the truth.