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Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 04:30

New song i wrote n recorded Today,

http://www.zshare.net/audio/69814509e3844d40/

Not mixed AMAZING so qualitys not the best, but it's listanable
Plus because of my shitty soundcard, theres no bass in my voice

Lyrics:


(PRESSURE)


Life N Death Productions



(Verse 1)

You cant put that much fuckin pressure on a kid, But people did
beat ur head against a fence until ur meant to reach the lid
Sense that im depressed , yes, but i can simply make the flip
The minute that im away from Those who made my life to shit
It's sick. I focus on the things that honestly just fit
into a place, where i can sit, and be proud of the things i did
and Loudly express myself, Not concerned of what might be next
im learning obsessed, regret only this burden on my chest
Heard that you got it yesterday, so Hurry get on deck
me im not on it yet, once i figure out all this mess
I will Opress and take the highest road leadin on to success
He is the bomb What is next, intercept being strong with a Nest
Vietnam, couldnt even stop us all from being a threat
the seats are ready and it's only Gettin Three in a jet
Me and my homies are ready, we'll fuckin leave when its BEST
only we don't belive it till were really Seein are death

(chorus

No i cant be more like this person that ud like me to be,
Be like ur ur cousin,nice and loving, live a life that's not me
But what ur askin, is for me to give up rappin and Please
I look at what these others do, i just start laughin and Leave.
What u say to me is similar to a kick in the nuts
I aint ever making the change,you should be givin this up
learn not to Cave Turns out the way that i be livin it sucks,
to yu anyways, Behind the scenes im livin it up


(Verse 2)

While u float inside the waters Needin some help to Flap it
well be flyin threw the sky and releasin some Life jackets
Preserve urself as long as it takes, you can move On with the waves
of other artists that arent tryin hard enough to be Traced
don't give it up get the fuck in there face,
Ive hit the breaking point I've Had enough of this Place
People keep stealin from me, who the hell can i trust
Those who claim they love me, only dwell in my luck
Tell me that what im doin doesn't make me a buck
id rather live happy then greedy, and have the crapiest stuff
And still manage to make my music while im laughing it up
friends that i can depend upon Who in fact wont give up
and it works the same the other way,im happy as fuck
Devote ur focus onto what you like, Lyrically fuck the mic
Experiencing such a night, I want this life, tho it's unlikely for me
Might need the Insight, wouldn't you like to be free.



(Verse 3)

This will never end for me it's Maybe delerious ,
and it might just be what i am Meant to be
the 9 to 5 crap I try to scrap and I repent the scene
eventually ill die from no survival packs attatched to my cemented Dreams
Waisted all this time to rap
Find a gap and try to Latch, Direction is as blind as bats
a question that's fine to ask, how can this be understood
the lesson is to fly in packs.
rather sit or lie in tacks,Sell my hips, and why is that
a verse for a desired track, make more Cash after, then buy em back
Now thats an attempt, retire and Crack open a Bent bottle of Wine that i had
when i was Minor and Whack, Ill be livin the life, Signed and Recap
how i was told that , That id be a hold back, I Crap my pants while i Up and laugh at the facts.
Trafficing tracks, across the world,thats where happiness lasts
Ill get to where im goin , if it means im wrapped in cast
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 04:56

Life And Death is a beast. Heard this before and loved it. Yeah, mixing ain't done I can tell but the track is still pretty dope. Like it much better than your 40 Bars and that other track snippet. Flow was dope on the verses...Always liked your writing scheme. Chrous was damn dope. Loved it. Didn't like the 2nd verse as much, not sure why but I just wasn't feeling it; not anything technical though. 3rd verse was iight, liked it better than 2nd cause of flows. Delivery was nice and smooth in the entire track. 8.5/10

But if this was mixed, it be 10/10.
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby _Ironic_ » Dec 13th, '09, 04:58

yo yo yo, you already know how I feel about this shitt

flow - 10/10

delivery - 144124124/10 :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

lyrics - 9/10

hook - 43942394/10 :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

3rd Verse was easily the best on this, flow was just sick on it.

overall the best song I've heard on this site. PERIOD. no but's about it, you fuckin murdered this track

10/10

KEEP DOIN IT! :b: :b: :b:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 04:59

^What? :unsure:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby _Ironic_ » Dec 13th, '09, 05:02

Solace wrote:^What? :unsure:



....?

you obviously agree cuz u gave it a 10/10 if it was mixed properly. so what?
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 05:03

haha thanks guys, and no i didnt listen to any em LMAO. he hasnt been played out of my speakers in a while.. just dont feel like focusing on other people/artists while i have my own shit to do now lol.... There are only a certain amount of ways yu can truely bring it... Slow, Fast with Flow, and wordplay..
Punchlines... or Storys ..I mix em all up, and this is what i like to put together,, It's all about trying new things,,, I had a blast tho, took up more than half my day

Lastnight i caught my "relative that i live with" Adult to add, and caught that person, snoopin threw my wallet... and juts decided hey, ima drop a track about some of the pressures im dealin with
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 05:06

_Ironic_ wrote:
Solace wrote:^What? :unsure:



....?

you obviously agree cuz u gave it a 10/10 if it was mixed properly. so what?

So were you trying to mock me or something lol?

@Vet, well whatever gets stuff off your mind :y: How did the whole stealing from your wallet situation go?
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 05:08

was gay, im still pissed off, but i have a song so im happy LOL.. Just was wierd to see, the unexpected.. Made me start rethinking. why i live where i do, and Deal with the people i do..

need a change.. and that's gonna take place soon, cant wait to record in peace, for full days at a time
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby _Ironic_ » Dec 13th, '09, 05:12

Solace wrote:
_Ironic_ wrote:
Solace wrote:^What? :unsure:



....?

you obviously agree cuz u gave it a 10/10 if it was mixed properly. so what?

So were you trying to mock me or something lol?

@Vet, well whatever gets stuff off your mind :y: How did the whole stealing from your wallet situation go?



lmao, not even close bro....it's really how I feel about the song..this shit was HOTT...easily the best I've heard on this site.
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 05:18

I appreciate that a ton... it's worth it to put in the work, especially when yu record... cause the songs you do record will be forever... Make em the best you can,, it's hard work momentarily.. but after its done... u have something u can just be proud of haha.... Again thanks for the feedback..
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 05:29

@Ironic, iight good shit then :y:

@Vettori, so is this going to be mixed in the end?
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Hadez » Dec 13th, '09, 05:30

good stuff. likin the multis. especially in the third verse.

nice listen :y:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 05:34

and yea.. ima use this to practice ofd of, and see what i can fix up in my new delivery of it, gonna remain mostly the same, just line up some of my words better....when the pace is fasst yu can get carried away quickly haha again thx for the feed guys... thx hadez
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 05:34

Cool...Either way, new Vettori is always good :smoking:
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Re: Pressure -Vettori (Prod By LifeNDeath)

Postby Vettori » Dec 13th, '09, 05:36

haha i appreciate that...I fractured my ankle at work a week ago, and ive been taking this time to practice and get alot of work done, have gotten 7 new songs completed
in the past week, So just looking forward to what tommorows gonna bring :D
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