elements (6 man collab)

[enjinn]

an old hip hop site i used to post at decided to make a track with some of its members...MouthPeace, 2Tall, MADD, One Term, lil bri then me...i wrote the first half of my verse for a collab with ax d and the second half for another collab...i dunno if youll like it

http://www.zshare.net/audio/70182607c5ea2136/

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat bored the fuck out of me...
1st guy: needs to work on clarity in his voice and his delivery
2nd guy: smoothen out his flow
3rd guy: delivery!
4th guy: flow is shaky as hell
5th guy: i like ur flow homie...delivery is also there...good job
did i miss someone where's the sixth? lol anywayz

[enjinn]

thanks man!

[quote="°[~CHR!$~]
did i miss someone where's the sixth? lol anywayz[/quote]

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