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[New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 23rd, '09, 20:46

So this is another completely different track from me.

the conceptis sex, in a humour way but also challenging how it isnt spoke about enough.


Zshare: http://www.zshare.net/audio/7028452186540135/

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uc5WSWfVJBw


zshare is the better quality, but i would appreciate if you would all take a click on the youtube aswell, im trying hard to generate buzz around my local area and if i hit something like 300 views it would spark alot of talk witch would help generate it :sweating:

all feedback and comments are appreciated, hope you enjoy the track :worship:

i really think im progressing with my delivery and being more relative, this track shows this i think.
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 23rd, '09, 21:50

ok first... marts beats have been sounding a lot similar lately..they all got that creepy spooky-ness in them..it's still a dope beat though. i like the chorus, catchy in a way i guess..verses were really good, i was feeling all of them..you didn't slip once and i dont think i caught any mistakes in the song.. sounded real pro..good job on that.. good song overall, doesn't have much replay value for me, but that's because i speak about sex freely so doesn't apply to my society..
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 23rd, '09, 22:00

Honestly, this is probably one of your best tracks I've heard. Mart did a very nice job on the beat as usual, coming from one Artist to another I know how fun it is writing to those Mart beats, lol. Your flow is flawless and your wordplay is great, even your accent is dope in this song!

Keep it up man, we DEFF. gotta get a collab done for this next TR project.
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby mart85 » Dec 23rd, '09, 22:36

Tash8 wrote:ok first... marts beats have been sounding a lot similar lately..they all got that creepy spooky-ness in them..it's still a dope beat though.


thanks for the comments, tash and steve

but about my beats sounding similar, to be fair, those beats you're hearing on Bar's tracks were made litterally months apart, so depending on which ones he chooses, and when he/we finish the tracks, it's pretty much a coincidence if they sound the same. But to be honest, I didn't think this beat sounded creepy :sweating: Like Bar and I discussed, we viewed it as a light track and Bar thought it would fit well for his humorous concept. But it's cool, as I've learned with feedback over the years, people can view some beats quite differently than I do, pretty much everybody has his own opinion/view on how a beat sounds.
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 25th, '09, 00:20

thanks guys :worship:

and yeh, i dont see this track as dark or spooky :sweating:
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Tornado » Dec 25th, '09, 12:46

This track is reminiscent of Plan B. The beat from Mart is ill apart from the hits that come in, otherwise it has a light hearted and funky bumping vibe to it. It's a great track asweell, different from your normal style, you seem to be rhyming with ease now and not struggling and rushing and the results show evidently. A 9/10 because if you got rid of the hits on the beat, ithis'd be constantly bumping in my room but it's just my taste
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Nick. Y » Dec 27th, '09, 13:22

nice beat,nice lyrics, one of my favorite concepts . I've listened to some of Mart85 remixes and no doubt they're all dope as fuck.I like Best rapper alive so much , I bump it in my car very often :8) .Keep up the good work fellas
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Drama Setter » Dec 27th, '09, 13:30

cool track man keep it up
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 28th, '09, 18:28

Tornado wrote:This track is reminiscent of Plan B. The beat from Mart is ill apart from the hits that come in, otherwise it has a light hearted and funky bumping vibe to it. It's a great track asweell, different from your normal style, you seem to be rhyming with ease now and not struggling and rushing and the results show evidently. A 9/10 because if you got rid of the hits on the beat, ithis'd be constantly bumping in my room but it's just my taste


thanks man :worship:

Nick. Y wrote:nice beat,nice lyrics, one of my favorite concepts . I've listened to some of Mart85 remixes and no doubt they're all dope as fuck.I like Best rapper alive so much , I bump it in my car very often :8) .Keep up the good work fellas


appreciate checking it out man :worship:

drama setter wrote:cool track man keep it up


thanks man, will do :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Emadyville » Dec 29th, '09, 01:50

Damn, since the sex-ed/best head beginning this shit was dope. Beat is great, hook is good, has you nodding your head. Love your accent on this, you flow great, really go well with the beat, has this great laid back feel. Dope drop :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 30th, '09, 17:10

Emadyville wrote:Damn, since the sex-ed/best head beginning this shit was dope. Beat is great, hook is good, has you nodding your head. Love your accent on this, you flow great, really go well with the beat, has this great laid back feel. Dope drop :worship:



thanks man appreciatethe feedback :worship:
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 6th, '10, 15:45

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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 6th, '10, 16:37

mmmmmm,, concept is fire, i never heard one rapping about sex over here, so ya ,, lyrics are sick from what i understood lol ,,, beat is sick , and ya mixing is good as well , i liked ya delivery in da 2nd and 3rd verse, you control it wisely , and ya u sounds dope, hook is great this time,, i liked it ,, and you flowed great through da entire track ,, ya one of ya best tracks, so far, keep it up Bar 9/10 ,,,,, :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 8th, '10, 01:05

^ thanx alot man, appreciate it :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Sex (Produced By Mart85)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 11th, '10, 23:47

nearly 400 listens and no feed :(
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