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Ruthless - Oh! Valium

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Ruthless - Oh! Valium

Postby Tranquil » Dec 25th, '09, 09:49

Ok, i was going to drop an EP for Christmas but i wasn't feeling the concept of the album. This is the only track that i am going to drop that was off of the EP. So give it a listen, and tell us what you think :y:
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Re: Ruthless - Oh! Valium

Postby Tranquil » Dec 26th, '09, 00:34

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Re: Ruthless - Oh! Valium

Postby Solace » Dec 26th, '09, 06:17

You change names and scrap stuff to often. But whatever floats your boat. Checked the track...You got an accent I forgot. Your flow is pretty nice on the first verse, some parts on the rest of verses were just meh. But a member named Eminemislegend making a song about valium just after Eminem does. Pretty original you are...It sortve reminded me of a wacker version of Deja Vu or something and the chorus (which was sung not too bad, could improve though) reminded me of the chorus of My Mom. You've gotten a LOT better though man. Would like a lot more multies in your verses though, and some more meaning...Like the way to end out your track is "I am a user and I am nice" like seriously? Anyways your getting there...6.5/10 on TR level. Average. Somewhat replayable. Keep at it.
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Re: Ruthless - Oh! Valium

Postby Tranquil » Dec 26th, '09, 06:59

Solace wrote:You change names and scrap stuff to often. But whatever floats your boat. Checked the track...You got an accent I forgot. Your flow is pretty nice on the first verse, some parts on the rest of verses were just meh. But a member named Eminemislegend making a song about valium just after Eminem does. Pretty original you are...It sortve reminded me of a wacker version of Deja Vu or something and the chorus (which was sung not too bad, could improve though) reminded me of the chorus of My Mom. You've gotten a LOT better though man. Would like a lot more multies in your verses though, and some more meaning...Like the way to end out your track is "I am a user and I am nice" like seriously? Anyways your getting there...6.5/10 on TR level. Average. Somewhat replayable. Keep at it.

thanks man, but Ruthless is the final name, and i no about the track following eminem, but i found my style now, thats why i scrapped the EP. I will be releasing more tracks soon ;)
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