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Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

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Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 26th, '09, 01:04

I'm in no state to re do this like I planned to fix it up (ie wib)

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(Verse)
Whips ta ya back, hit so twist and react
They slit on impact, shit yo, ya vision goes black
Then simply it’s back, crazy, ya skin is intact
No incisions or scabs, maybe this isn’t that bad
Wait, what’s missing in fact, pay attention you hack
No sound, just growls, wow now listen to that
Pretend it ain’t back, when you know that it is
The same dark thing that used to haunt you as a kid
But could it hurt you now as awful as it did
Just then, it went, jumped, caught you at the rib
Held you down, laughed at ya, clocked you with a fist
Slapped you around, an drank from the bottle it did grip
Scoffed you and it went, left, man it battered you
Love you dad, see ya later, tomorrow after school
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Re: Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby Solace » Dec 26th, '09, 06:19

What the fuck.
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Re: Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby classthe_king » Dec 26th, '09, 06:20

Solace wrote:What the fuck.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 26th, '09, 23:44

ya rhymes are okay but you realli realli dont sound good on this at all the quality really sucks an your slurring and all sorts :confusion:
As Of Right Now.....
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Re: Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby Solace » Dec 27th, '09, 02:07

GibbzyTrShady wrote:ya rhymes are okay but you realli realli dont sound good on this at all the quality really sucks an your slurring and all sorts :confusion:

You...You cant even hear him...It's like...Like a robot screaming.. :unsure:
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Re: Nimbus - Lucid Nightmare

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 27th, '09, 02:18

Im not hating nimbus but yo' record ure shit on something a lil better quality man an i dont know how long you been spitting and recording but if its not long its not bad if its a while man you need to take ure time an listen to everyting ure mixing before you finish the track *clean,crisp and easy to understand* thats what yuo need broo
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