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Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 04:38

First song I'm releasing from my mixtape, all feedback is appreciated :y:

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

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I’m a walkin switch blade so any miss match this made,
Will have me with my damn wrist snapped this way,
And that way exactly rap made me that way,
And facts say try me and be ready to cascade,
And ya know this is scary I’m a dictionary walkin,
With a mission in theory rappin circles very often,
So listen and hear me, a visionary droppin,
Rhymes as sick as dysentery-and you know I’m not stoppin…
So you better know that I’m wanting respect,
Cause I’m out for blood and yeah I’m hunting you next,
There is no discussion repercussions I get,
With my hands full I know I could be bluffin I guess,
But you be rushin ta check as blood rushes ta sweat,
Ta tears if you aint thinking this is Russian roulette,
You must be trustin my steps and know I’m nothing ta test,
Cause if you wake me up I’ll put something ta rest…

Hook 2x:
Everything I do has everyone of them doubt,
in this hen house you’ll see me again now,
pull a pen out, pull a pen, pull a pen, pull a pen out,
cause that’s what I’m about
I never create songs to spark the hate,
I guess sometimes angers just hard to relate,
you’re just a fish in the sea and I’m the shark in a lake,
As you darken the slate then you start a debate,
To put the hate on me and then you harp on mistakes,
Like I’m not up to par and I am far from great,
So I just speak my mind until I start to break,
But know I speak my mind from all the parts you shaped,
So take my vantage, for me it's an advantage,
To be outlandish, and bandage the damaged,
Until I'm famished, before I vanish,
To brandish my name in the game be demanded,
I’m on your doorstep as you comb with forceps,
Wrote like four sets just to give me more reps,
And you heard the knock but won’t open the door yet,
When you don’t have to remember just never forget…
Last edited by Emadyville on Jan 5th, '10, 04:48, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 04:47

I can't listen on myspace, can you put it up anywhere else :(
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 04:50

http://www.zshare.net/audio/707941119ecc5c54/

there homie, sorry, wasn't even thinkin :smoking:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 04:57

Alright first of all, I hate the beat and i hate the chorus and your flow on the beat. Kind of ruins the song for me. But I loved your rapping. Your lyrics were dope, multis were great, quality was great which made it worth listening to. I'll deffinately be checking for you in the future.
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 05:01

classthe_king wrote:Alright first of all, I hate the beat and i hate the chorus and your flow on the beat. Kind of ruins the song for me. But I loved your rapping. Your lyrics were dope, multis were great, quality was great which made it worth listening to. I'll deffinately be checking for you in the future.


damn, well sorry for what you didnt like, but thanks for gettin through the song and for the feed man, always appreciated :y:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Just Silver » Jan 5th, '10, 05:05

i actually like the beat but the flow seemed somewhat choppy overall phat stuff
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 5th, '10, 06:35

its dope man i like it good shit :smoking:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 06:38

Just Silver wrote:i actually like the beat but the flow seemed somewhat choppy overall phat stuff


macdaddy019967 wrote:its dope man i like it good shit :smoking:


Thank you both, and yeah macdaddy you fed this song before, which I really appreciated :y:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby gutawafang » Jan 5th, '10, 06:39

DAMN Emadyville. I got hooked man. I swear it's really catchy, especially the chorus. It's radio-friendly to me man. Nice beat used. :y: :y: :y:

I really like the beat. :)
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby gutawafang » Jan 5th, '10, 06:43

And pardon my double post. I like Listen to Your Heart too. :worship:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 5th, '10, 06:45

gutawafang wrote:DAMN Emadyville. I got hooked man. I swear it's really catchy, especially the chorus. It's radio-friendly to me man. Nice beat used. :y: :y: :y:

I really like the beat. :)

yeah radio friendly is the way too go especially if ur serious about getting a mainstream audience hooked
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 06:49

gutawafang wrote:DAMN Emadyville. I got hooked man. I swear it's really catchy, especially the chorus. It's radio-friendly to me man. Nice beat used. :y: :y: :y:

I really like the beat. :)


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gutawafang wrote:And pardon my double post. I like Listen to Your Heart too. :worship:


And thank you again :worship:

macdaddy019967 wrote:yeah radio friendly is the way too go especially if ur serious about getting a mainstream audience hooked


Yeah, well hopefully people keep saying this, I know this isn't a for everyone track, but thanks again :y:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Tash8 » Jan 5th, '10, 06:57

wow this is dope as fuck.. verse wise this was excellent.. hook coulda been done better though i feel (especially the mixing of the pen) otherwise DOPE...second verse was way better than the first imo.but both were good.

I think ur only real "flaw" is your delivery.. it could be touched up a bit but honestly that probably has to do more with your recording equipment than it does you...
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '10, 06:59

Tash8 wrote:wow this is dope as fuck.. verse wise this was excellent.. hook coulda been done better though i feel (especially the mixing of the pen) otherwise DOPE...second verse was way better than the first imo.but both were good.

I think ur only real "flaw" is your delivery.. it could be touched up a bit but honestly that probably has to do more with your recording equipment than it does you...


Yeah I mean I just have a mic, and I don't know more than the very basics with mixing, but I appreciate the feed man and I'm glad u liked the song :y:
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Re: Pull A Pen Out

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '10, 09:56

i liked da beat ,, lyrics, and da way flow over it it's great , i love the way u rap here, nice shit man , , i enjoyed,, it :)
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