Listenin now, maybe lay back a bit on the intro...Somethin alot of people including myself needs to stop doin is the "YO" Thing. lol, just startin to frustrate me.
You have ur way of writing Proper. so u definatly know enough of what ur doing...but u need to Take more time into recording..The quality might unmotivate u, But really put in the effort..Autotune= instant garbage.. so for future referance don't use it..It takes from the song.. Especially if used Improperly. I like the beat, and i think the hook coulda been alot better... I liked the things yu said...But how u said it wasn't too catchy and again the autotune thing ugh... sall good, Definatly can see u commin out with a better song tho.
Maybe some more multi's + work on ur flow a bit, the odd time it's choppy, and add some Strength to ur vocals... make it sound like ur in front of me, explainin urself. thats how every track should be, like ur talking to ur audiance. and if it's important, it needs to be Said as so.
cool shit man, i think i heard 1 or two tracks of urs before...def improved,
lemme know when u drop a new one..ill be the first to see if uve made any changes
