Depression In My Mind - Slice

[Slice]

a new song from me, it's a sad song

http://www.myspace.com/slizzle88

enjoy and i hope u give me feedbacks

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok your new so here's my new breakdown imma do for new artists on tr.

first answer these questions lol


how long you been making tracks ?


thats all i want to know lol


anywae, depression in my mind, your voice sounds nice, you got understanding of writing ""but the world is to cold even though im wearing a sweater" thats a nice line good visiual, "a bullter proof vest wouldnt help im wounded inside" again very nice.


ok the flow and beats is what you aint got, i dont think a great rapper could flow to that beat well..no offence if you made it, its just not got good structure imo.

for beats, shout to members tash, bizzarekid, big ax-d, sajjad...check out the section "the studio" guys on here will help you out with beats also use www.soundclick.com search hard enough youll find dope beats.

your quality sounds good with proper mixing youll have no problem there, check out youtube for some mixing help what program do you use to mix and record ?

your delivery was a little weak express yourself more, but first get a proper beat and get a flow across it so we can judge how you go against a good beat, got potential man and everyone here will put you in the right direction.

feedback other peoples tracks and they'lll help you anywae they can, keep it up man

[Slice]

thx for feedback bar

i been making tracks for 2 years

yeah i really need better beats, where i can flow better

i use magix for mix and record

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thx for feedback bar

i been making tracks for 2 years

yeah i really need better beats, where i can flow better

i use magix for mix and record

aight man, well, i'd recomend you use cool edit pro 2.1 if you request in the download centre your sure to get a link for it. thats what most people at this level use and its the easiest and only one us here could give you real help with.

as for beats www.soundclick.com easily the best way to get them, also again check out audio stage ask producer on here, they are always happy to give out beats for rappers.

but yeh man, keep it up, you got potential man just get them beats and try developing your flow, youll see results in no time just keep doin it

[Slice]

thanks for the info, i downloaded it

[Slice]

I use Magix too sometimes, Samplitude. It's a good program if you learn how to use its just like all the other GUI's. If you still want to use that I would suggest that you get some better non-destructive plug-ins. If you can get the songs at least sounding good to the ear, you'll gain more points and from the jump.

I could barely hear what you were saying so I can't really judge. But BAR is right, until you can find someone to make you better beats go to soundclick. That's where I started at about five or six years ago.

It's all about the flow man keep going at it because rapping is kind of like riding a bike, once you get it you got it, you know. And after you got it, (flow, content, beats) you can start doing wheelies and backflips lol.

thx for feedback
maybe I'll get some plug-ins

[i4ill]

for a bebinner that wasn't bad at all...beat wasn't good at all. Lyrics were nice, props for the emotional subject. Flow could be better if the beat was better. Delivery needs somework but overall that wasn't bad at all...
keep doin' this shit man!

[Slice]

for a bebinner that wasn't bad at all...beat wasn't good at all. Lyrics were nice, props for the emotional subject. Flow could be better if the beat was better. Delivery needs somework but overall that wasn't bad at all...
keep doin' this shit man!

thanks man, i appreciate that