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Some of my shit

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 16th, '10, 20:04

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Re: Some of my shit

Postby classthe_king » Jan 16th, '10, 20:20

I downloaded Round 1 but im still listening to it so ill drop you some feed soon :y:
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 16th, '10, 20:21

Word, good looks
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby classthe_king » Jan 16th, '10, 20:58

Alright well overall its a good tape. It's overall lyrically solid. You had some dope punches in there. Main problem for you was flow/delivery/quality. Your flow was good, but sometime s i feel you didn't ride the beat as well as you could have. I don't know if it was the quality messing up the delivery but you sounded really muffled while rapping. It would have been alot better if you sounded clearer. But overall good job, keep working on it :y:

Songs that stuck out for me was Vibe with Me and Ohio To New Orleans.
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 17th, '10, 02:06

aint checkin them all right now man but ill try download the tape tonight check it tomorrow


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alright your good at writing man, need to tighten that flow up a little but you go across nice for most parts, aint enjoying the beat too much not my style.

defiantly like your lyrics but man, like i said will try listen to tape tomorrow :y:
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Brownwall » Jan 17th, '10, 02:28

Definitely lyrically dope like everyone's saying. I notice the kind of muffled voice that was mentioned. I'm assuming that's to do with mic quality. Maybe you could experiment some more with your recording technique. Sounds well-mixed, nevertheless. There's room for improvement in flow & delivery, I guess. But it's still dope.
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 17th, '10, 05:00

Word, personally I think it has to do with my recording environment, I have no sound proofing and Im still tryin to figure out a good spot to put the mic where I dont get the rooms natural reverb..

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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 17th, '10, 18:30

not bad.....i only listened to a few songs......but not bad
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Emadyville » Jan 17th, '10, 18:32

I listened to can't fuck with me, from the ashes, and built to win.

I think you sound good, your voice sounds kinda familiar tho, I can't think of who you sound like but it's someone lol. You rhyme well, but a lot of your rhymes become predictable, because it seems like you write a long list of rhymes and then make it all work so u can use em all, I say that because that's kinda how I used to write, and why I thought some rhymes became predictable.
Your flow was decent, there was some parts on each song that were off, I think it was all on parts when you went slower for a line, as in syllable-wise and that pause kinda fucked it up, but over all it def wasn't bad by any means. You're delivery I think may need work, not in like the emotional aspect, I feel like the emotion in your voice is fitting, but your voice almost sounded the same to me in all 3 songs I listened to, and by from the ashes it almost seemed mono-toned and made that song seem boring, if that makes sense.
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 18th, '10, 20:24

^Thanks for the feed..trust me, Im still a work in progress..lol
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 19th, '10, 02:00

Coleon wrote:
Strictt Ame wrote:Word, personally I think it has to do with my recording environment, I have no sound proofing and Im still tryin to figure out a good spot to put the mic where I dont get the rooms natural reverb..

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if you have a laptop set up then couldn't you record in your car, it's already soundproofed and all

^nah...if he got a condensor mic...he needs phantom power...which needs a plug....or a mixer...ect...then he'd need a power supply........but if he's using usb or a ghetto mic..then yea...

yo on the real....if you got a closet...even a lil one....set up in there.....and keep your clothes hung up...it'll take away any echo...its what i do.......
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Re: Some of my shit

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 19th, '10, 02:39

I thought about the closet thing (pause)..I may try that next time I record..or Im gonna take some of my tax money and get sound sound proofing squares
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