Brotherhood of BROWN - 3 tracks

[Brownwall]

Hoping to have people check out my group's music: http://www.youtube.com/user/Brotherhood3MUSIC
Comments and ratings would be cool. Let me know what y'all think.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

listening to what we about

quality sounds a litytle muffled at the start, but cant be helped.

ok imma be straight with you i can only say what i hear, sounds like eminem..and i hate saying that coz it sounds like hating but the voice and the way you try rhyme at some points really reminds me of him in the first verse.

is that still you on the second verse ? delivery is completely different. im guessing it aint, but i enjoyed the second verse really intense delivery good verse.

ahh right so its a group.

right well third verse who is that ? they were dope as fuck killed the track


will check the rest out later man

[Brownwall]

Thx for the feedback. I don't mind ppl bein' straight up and yea its a group.

Youtube might've distorted the quality a bit, cuz I wansn't able to get tht HQ option going.
And we are recording on a usb mic.

Anyways, I've always kinda sounded like em I think. And so I'm still tryna find my voice. So yea I kno wat ur sayin'. The second guy alway has a strong delivery. And the last guy is definitely our best all-around.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Thx for the feedback. I don't mind ppl bein' straight up and yea its a group.

Youtube might've distorted the quality a bit, cuz I wansn't able to get tht HQ option going.
And we are recording on a usb mic.

Anyways, I've always kinda sounded like em I think. And so I'm still tryna find my voice. So yea I kno wat ur sayin'. The second guy alway has a strong delivery. And the last guy is definitely our best all-around.

glad you take it well man and aint a dick like most people lol, but yeh man everything else about it was fine, just work on tryna get a more distinct voice, itll serve well goin forward.


overall as a group btw i think you all have great apeal, the sticky fingazz type fans will love that guy on the second verse he brings somethign real raw and different, you got a real mainstream apeal imo, and the last guy is like you said great all around.

keep doin what ya doin

[Spyder]

thought the track you had posted in the And you are was pretty dope
i didnt realy notice a resemblence to Em in your voice

but lyrics are all there and good, sound like you got your multies and all that
delivery was ight for me, flow was nice

just gotta find what you do

[Vettori]

Beat was kinda cool....anthem Ish.... quality lacks...first guy.. i think the chorus was first...Hmm not so catchy...but sounded decent how it was put together... and first verse..haha actually better then id expected.. Really good..Definatly room for improvement. But You guys know what yur doing.

second guy has a diff flow.. then it switches to a normal ish flow.. 1 or two times i heard where it coulda been corrected.. but non the less nice.....Very raspy/deep voice Like u smoked alot of Stuff... haha :P sall good its differant.. as bar i think said. some people will enjoy that preferably...

and last guy id say was good....but first guy did great in a way that i enjoyed it more then both..
said a few things i liked..and that were said properly.. and third verse had it's moments.... definatly a good group... Compete with eachother on friendly terms to help evolve.. Make the sickest track you can by urself...and have them try to do better....and the next do better

and untill u just get really good...i had a great time when i rapped with a group...helped me Get alot better. and taught me tons... Was always friendly competition.

Keep at it guys. Hope to here a hit with good quality shortly

[B.A.D.]

kinda like everyone told you already

the dude on the 3rd verse, he seems experienced, the hook... I like the lyrics on it but I dont like how it is delivered... I like your boy and the ballon line, funny shit man

the dude on verse 2 has that DMX feelin lol... funny dude...

good track man, nice hip hop

but maybe you should change from B.O.B to B.B. .... cuz well... ya know B.O.B. lol

anyways, I enjoyed it

[Mr. Chambers]

ok i listened to lyrical massacre

first guy...had a weird flow.....there were some times where it was good and other times where it felt awkward....

2nd guy....honestly wasn't feeling this guy at all........just too........i dunno just didn't like his style...lyrics were alright..but nothing special....

3rd guy was easily the best.....flow was much smoother....reminds me of common......lyrics were good....delivery oculda been better but not bad...def the best