Back Again- D. Dubs

[Emadyville]

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

http://www.zshare.net/audio/71386131b475a7b2/

Hook:
Back again back again,
yeah yeah yeah I'm back again,
back to where I started from and back to square one
2x

Verse 1:
Since adolescence had the lessons too bad I had ta question,
and it’s sad was mad inventive, I just didn’t have incentive,
so I vented and I meant it, eclectic so I set it, up-now I’m expected,
to be what I won’t I won’t let it,
I hear what I say don’t say what I hear I see that that’s demented,
and a long wait, so elongate but don’t overcompensate,
cause wrong ta hate, and yet I do and contemplate,
from being at the bottom stayin rotten wait for someway out this common place...
So I gotta sit back in tact with rap,
in fact hit gas where’s the whiplash,
but I know its not an end all,
crescendo till I’m KING let’s go, Lesko,
it’s my best and yes no, this is special.
tested all the time when you I-D a, rapper but you have no idea...

Hook 4x

Verse 2:
I can stand still, but I can’t keep my hand still,
so go look my notebooks in the landfill,
to me that’s a damn kill, what’s left to do,
it’s not death to you but it’s death ta me,
especially when this sentence be,
what prevents me from destiny,
my fate it smog and the density,
is fogged my god what identity,
is left for me and this entity,
it’s ending me spending me and now it will depend on me…
I’m almost cryin, won’t deny I am, but I’m tryin damn,
it’s not how high cause to fly I can, scared this pen will die in my hand,
so I ask why to the fans, when it’s all my fault,
but I have four words, that will move me forwards...I am back again

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hooks a little weak.


you got the flow and lyrics on this your delivery is really lacking though and you never usually got that problem man, only bad thing i got to say is the delivery on this track apart form that i loved the rest

[Emadyville]

hooks a little weak.


you got the flow and lyrics on this your delivery is really lacking though and you never usually got that problem man, only bad thing i got to say is the delivery on this track apart form that i loved the rest

thanks for the feed man

[Tash8]

hooks a little weak.


you got the flow and lyrics on this your delivery is really lacking though and you never usually got that problem man, only bad thing i got to say is the delivery on this track apart form that i loved the rest

really? i loved the laidback delivery on this... oh well i like it, great job man!

[Most-Hated]

Yeah this was dope track...Well thought out and structured nicely

I thought the flow was the highlight...I really enjoyed how your lyrics transistioned with the beat everytime it changed...very nice

Beat was great

Delivery though was lacking. A little to monotone for my taste... You were laid back, but not really (if that makes sence) It seemed like you were trying to force yourself not to get over hyped...

It would have worked (the laidbackness) if you were a little more laid back like almost in a high manner (high as in weed high)...

but overall I liked it, your a smart guy. It shows in your musical structure

[Emadyville]

^ Thanks man, much appreciated. I tried to keep it more laid back on the first verse, then have it transition to sound emotional more in the second verse as the lyrics were more emotional. And I don't smoke, never had so haha I can't really do that "weed high" shit like you said

Thanks again

[Most-Hated]

^ Thanks man, much appreciated. I tried to keep it more laid back on the first verse, then have it transition to sound emotional more in the second verse as the lyrics were more emotional. And I don't smoke, never had so haha I can't really do that "weed high" shit like you said

Thanks again

I was just referring to like a trippy sounding voice...uhhh nevermind..

I just see alot of potential in you and I wish I could work with you in person on some stuff...

keep it up my freind

[Mr. Chambers]

chorus...sucked...i'ma be honest...that was like a rookie caliber chorus...i mean i ain't trying to hate or act like i'm the greatest chorus writer in the world....but....that was just uncomfortable...

beat as fucking sick....

first verse was fucking flawless.....i loved it..nice smooth flow with very good lyrics...good shit

2nd verse had good lyrics.....but the flow was a lil shakey...and really paled in comparison to the first verse

7/10 for the beat and first verse.......i'd say scrap the chorus and 2nd verse....and re-do them...cuz that first verse was something special pause.....

[Emadyville]

^ thanks for being honest with the feed chambers, I appreciate it man