That's How Long-D. Dubs

[Emadyville]

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7138636463bcbcb1/

Lyrics:
You wanted me to come back,
how dumb that’s how I become rap,
so unwrap the presents as I remember my past,
22 years it fuckin feels like forever...


I guess the one, the one that you wanted,
and I’m here times like a hundred,
so what’s left for me to-do,
who-knew that I’d fuckin become you,
I guess some shit you can’t undo,
I’d walk a 1,000 miles then still run two…


Just look at me as I give you a reason,
to still eat sleep have sex and keep breathin,
but fuck that when fuck is the weekend,
I’m not shallow I’ve gone off the deep end,
yeah check as I’m facebook creepin,
it’s been 3 days and I’m still not sleepin...

This ones for love if you can’t afford it,
then don’t change and still act whorish,
or throw in the towel just for one more quit,
as she fuckin opened her legs-and four fit (forfeit),
so what can I say to get me inta more shit,
I haven’t learned my lesson in 22 years but…

Yeah you gotta know the best in the league win,
and that’s me on every record I’m speakin,
I won’t stop every second I’m breathin,
I’ll still write and have this tension feelin,
long gone as aggression releasin,
from all the nonsense I took for a year...

Some my lines so dope you wanna snort them,
get high and release those endorphins,
but a side effect you’ll be morphin,
and turn ill-just depends on the portion,
so do a sentence I’ll be the court then,
you’ll be gone for a whole fuckin year...

Yeah since I’m back rap is okay now,
they dug a hole can’t find their way out,
and the fake shit it better stay out,
it’s like overtime it gets played out,
you want an action figure get a playhouse,
cause I’ve lived here for 22 years…

See what I did I left you distracted,
got you thinkin it’s a diss track kid,
but it’s just me don’t dispatch him,
cause this mixtape will miss match them,
I’m fuckin gone don’t need ta make sense,
and I haven’t for 22 years but...

Yeah now I’m pissed I guess I suppose this,
is just a reason for me to expose this,
ain’t it funny ain’t it somethin atrocious,
everything I’ve known is everything I noticed,
so I stay here keep myself focused,
and to those I thought were my closest,
you’re long gone I’m still the dopest,
I guess it’s the truth you’re all fuckin bogus…

I’m lookin around like yeah what’s dope,
not much-do you a fuck no,
and I look as I have this much wrote,
I guess to get ahead I gotta be cut throat,
I said to get ahead I gotta be cut throat,
I’m sure it’ll take it a minute to sink in…

You look at me and asked what happened,
with girls the way that you rappin,
I wish tennis I played that damn,
cause I’d never lose with my fuckin back hand,
there I go you are trapped again,
but I won’t stop I’ll do this forever…

INTERLUDE...

Now I gotta shout out the best fuckin rap fan,
it’s Jamal I fuckin love that man,
is it Rick Rose no that’s Dan,
Hurricane Rick he's out kickin trashcans,
and startin fights I got your back man,
and I will for the rest of my life…

No I’m not done there’s still more drama,
I miss the first floor I miss Lanza,
it was a civic I got me a Honda,
and I miss Sean but more his persona,
and COD 4 I miss that trauma,
it’s only been a year but it feels like forever…

This is for my brother Ryan McDevitt,
fuck her son, don't fuckin let it,
Get to you, you know I'm here son,
So's Philly now that's where you're from,
And I'm still here, grab a chessboard,
We're both Kings and fuckin less is more,
We were both pawns, or so it seems,
But you need a King to play not a fuckin queen...

[Tash8]

like i said man,this is a dope song bro, real dope

[Emadyville]

like i said man,this is a dope song bro, real dope

Yeah man always appreciated

you know I like it man, my favorite track from you

Haha awesome, I'm guessing so it was just ridiculous, thanks homie

[Slim Zaddy]

mmm ,, i like the concept of the song ,, damn , it's cool man , i love it ,, ,, lyrics were nice and beat is cool ,, flow is great ,,,,, new style from you and ya i liked it ,, keep them comming

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i remember when bar talked about how multies would come natural etc...i didnt really know what he meant with it..but now i know the difference between natural and forced multies...
you definitly forced them...your content was pretty sweet...but then you just added to many fillers..to say it quite frankly .."rhyming just for the fuck of rhyming"....idk...this track had ups and downs to me...and the mixing was too quiet..0.5dB - 1.5dB raised then you good
umm..but the voice control impressed me..you really had a voice melody goin on...(far example: like eminem in gatman)....so yeah i dig that...flow was rushed at times...and it seemed like you didnt feel TOO comfortable with the beat....but its still pretty decent to me

[Emadyville]

i remember when bar talked about how multies would come natural etc...i didnt really know what he meant with it..but now i know the difference between natural and forced multies...
you definitly forced them...your content was pretty sweet...but then you just added to many fillers..to say it quite frankly .."rhyming just for the fuck of rhyming"....idk...this track had ups and downs to me...and the mixing was too quiet..0.5dB - 1.5dB raised then you good
umm..but the voice control impressed me..you really had a voice melody goin on...(far example: like eminem in gatman)....so yeah i dig that...flow was rushed at times...and it seemed like you didnt feel TOO comfortable with the beat....but its still pretty decent to me

thanks for the feed man, and this song was meant to be a fun/laid back track, and the lyrics were kinda meant to make you laugh sometimes but also think, I honestly didn't really for force any multi's on this one but I understand what you're saying, I just tried to make the rhymes work with the flow, and short rhymes didn't work on this for the flow (for instance rhymin hat/bat wouldn't work the words needed to have more than one syllable). I appreciate you takin the time man

[Emadyville]

mmm ,, i like the concept of the song ,, damn , it's cool man , i love it ,, ,, lyrics were nice and beat is cool ,, flow is great ,,,,, new style from you and ya i liked it ,, keep them comming

and thanks man

[Tash8]

i've played this a lot man...i guess you kinda need to feel the lyrics and kinda apply them to you're own life to appreciate it as much as i have.

[Emadyville]

i've played this a lot man...i guess you kinda need to feel the lyrics and kinda apply them to you're own life to appreciate it as much as i have.

Well I'm glad it had replay value for you, and is applicable to your life homie

[B.A.D.]

hmm I dont like this track tbh man.... I dont know why, the beat is absolutely not my style, and the delivery you brought was horrible to me (This is just a matter of taste, nothing personal )

the voice is pitched to high, so you should fix that, also the flow is un-constant to me, like seemed to forced above the beat, sounded un-natural..

the scheme you used is creative, tho its not adequate at all, makes the constant flow choppy and weird.

The lyrics were great, I like the two word multies things at the end of each line

on the mixing, the pella sounds too dry, and to high pitched, try to get more control of the wave dynamic and make it a little wet so it doesnt drill into one's ear

overall - good job, but you can do better

[Emadyville]

Hey Ax I appreciate the feed, this was one meant for the listener to just enjoy and shit, I'm sorry it wasn't your taste. I'm still learning with mixing and so I'm def noting what you said, so thanks man

[Most-Hated]

Hmm.. Didn't really follow this song very well. It was actually preety trippy in a wierd kinda way...

I enjoyed this though because the rhyme-scheme and cool song structure just showed your overall versitile talent which is such a key to sucess in this day and age...

I thought the beat over-powered you at some-points but with the help of overlays and better mixing this wouldn't even be noticeable...

You are a very talented rapper with just average mic-presence ...I think if you could hook up with a dope producer your overall musical talent would sky rocket to an all new level...

Your other songs are better, but this was a very cool concept and structure...

[Emadyville]

^ Thank you, I appreciate everything you said

Thanks for taking the time and being thorough

[Most-Hated]

^ Thank you, I appreciate everything you said

Thanks for taking the time and being thorough

No problem my freind