[New]Bar - In The Desert Produced By BizzareKid

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Small Track, produced by Bizzarekid, Props On the Beat.

my first attempt (after the beat comes back in) at a overall metaphor. hope i got it across.

Bar- In The Desert
http://www.zshare.net/audio/714060300cce81df/


Also got most tracks available on youtube now, if you missed on of my latest song here's direct links to listen

Sex - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uc5WSWfV ... re=channel
Rhyme Book - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhaQWU_v ... re=related
How It Iz Freestyle - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hv2mmPTa ... re=channel
Ready Steady Go - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AmRyQVerws

[_Ironic_]

ahhh yes, I know this beat..I was gonna rap on it after I finished my album for bizzare kid

I do like this beat though

pretty short track but lyrically this was pretty dope


you got alot better from the last track i listened to you...i like the abrupt ending, i used to do that all the time.

flow is pretty damn smooth, i could actually understand most of what you said..your accent seemed to clear up a bit as well..

delivery is good, not great but it comes with time..

anyways keep droppin man, this was pretty straight

7/10

[Mr. Chambers]

god dam...some of yall made this kid out to be the next premier............beat was ok.......i've heard alot better on here......

bar your verse was cool....ok...flow...shakey @ times....delivery still need work......need more confidence when you deliver your shit..for instance.....when you cut the beat and went on to say something like "labels better watch me"...i just wasn't feeling it....you gotta have ppl saying word dude is right........lyrics were cool...

keep dropping

[B.A.D.]

lol

the abrupt ending is very abrupt hahaha.... came in unexpectedly hahaha
the beat is simple... kinda bad imo lol... but does the job and has a good vibe to it

your flow went along well, I like it, your accent kinda actually fitted this, and it made it clearer
I like it

its a nice lil track, its really nice to see you acive on here man, its good to have one familiar voice now with all this amount of newbies postin shit smh

keep it up man

[GibbzyTrShady]

u deffo elivated recenlty man!!!

flow is on point delivery is nice nice work man!!!

[Slovinec]

god dam...some of yall made this kid out to be the next premier............beat was ok.......i've heard alot better on here......

bar your verse was cool....ok...flow...shakey @ times....delivery still need work......need more confidence when you deliver your shit..for instance.....when you cut the beat and went on to say something like "labels better watch me"...i just wasn't feeling it....you gotta have ppl saying word dude is right........lyrics were cool...

keep dropping

lol okay, you know how old this beat is, its like 5 months old i got a midi keyboard for christmas. Other then that quality of the melody and verse has increased, and ima send another one to Bar so he can wreck more shit.

[Tash8]

not bad, i liked the abrupt ending.. beat was ok, flow was good but nothing really stood out to me in this track. i liked your other ones..

[Tash8]

i miss tracks like this from you:

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5431264
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5283891
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5091694

[bg_pop]

I like the song
Good job BAR

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i miss tracks like this from you:

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5431264
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5283891
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5091694

lol well, personely i think the stuff i do with mart now is better than all 3 of them, the accent may change it for you all, but it wasnt me back then i got to keep my accent to be credible.

if its the concepts like racist thought you talking about im working on stuff like that now.