Grown Simba

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/714402892f1b7a36/

a throwaway song...i fucked up on the 2nd verse and honestly it don't fit the vibe of my mixtape too well.....tho i thought the 1st verse was too nice to cover up...so yea......don't sign me vol. 1.....coming soon...its gonna be epic...some "a long hot summer" type shit

[B.A.D.]

lol at the title... original

the beat is interesting... I dig it... except there are some parts where someone like say ooohhh to high lol... hahaha

damn, nice flow.... good rhymes... although Im starting to notice you dont switch topics to much, a lot of self cockyness n shit, only punchlines, which are really good... but, hmm.. seems at this point kinda repetitive

didnt saw where you fucked up exactly at verse 2 but I saw it wasnt up to par to the first one
a nice hook could be done in the song, bring some power to it... naaaaameaaaannnn???

either way, very enjoyable track, specially bcuz of the beat, good way to vibe on it

one thing If I could say about the mixing, its great but seems like something is missing on it, I dunno it might sound to dry, or to low... but... just a thought

good lil sometin man, keep at it

Plus!! looking forward to the mixtape

[Mr. Chambers]

lol at the title... original

the beat is interesting... I dig it... except there are some parts where someone like say ooohhh to high lol... hahaha

damn, nice flow.... good rhymes... although Im starting to notice you dont switch topics to much, a lot of self cockyness n shit, only punchlines, which are really good... but, hmm.. seems at this point kinda repetitive

didnt saw where you fucked up exactly at verse 2 but I saw it wasnt up to par to the first one
a nice hook could be done in the song, bring some power to it... naaaaameaaaannnn???

either way, very enjoyable track, specially bcuz of the beat, good way to vibe on it

one thing If I could say about the mixing, its great but seems like something is missing on it, I dunno it might sound to dry, or to low... but... just a thought

good lil sometin man, keep at it

Plus!! looking forward to the mixtape

yea i know what you mean i just did a real quick mix...cuz after hearing i was liek meh...other then the first verse i feel it would drag my tape down...
and as far as the subject content...i do alot of...i guess cockiness tracks but i promise that the tape is gonna be different...i'm actually doing a tape thats set up like masta ace's "a long hot summer"...kinda tell a story with my tracks you know.......so i'm hoping that it'll be a lil more....variety for ppl who wanna see me expand..

but thank you for listening i appreciate your time and comments

[Mr. Chambers]

btw....the song title and original is by j.cole........so i don't wanna take all sorts of credit for it....

[Solace]

Damn this is a tight track...Beat is dopeeee. Your flow, I loved it and I like the punchline shit. I didn't notice your mess up on the 2nd verse either. I liked how the flow was different on each verse. Great track, goin' be bumping this for sure.

[Element.]

This is dope man

[Tash8]

it's decent man.. i' dont like the beat so i wasn't really feelin the overall vibe of the song.. though ur flow was flawless,, i liked the part where you slowed down to emphasize some words..