Cliff Hanger - 7 Defecates

[gutawafang]

Download: http://www.mediafire.com/?jknzt2nbzzj

Please give me your feedbacks. Anything appreciated. I really wanna improve myself.

Thanks in advance.

[Requiem]

oh shit fish has got an album

downloading now... will feed soon

[gutawafang]

oh shit fish has got an album

downloading now... will feed soon

Arigato.

[Requiem]

Split Twice - beat is sick as fuuuck. ur delivery is fair, lyrics are pretty good man. the mixing takes getting use to. not bad man

Abortion- i like the way u started out... ur flow slipped a little. lmao at the point of view of the fetus again beat was sick

End the Pain2 - sick chorus. the beat's sick. ur flow is sick, the quality's a little distorted, but ur lyrics are pretty good on this. i heard quite a few multies.

You Forget Me- u got a unique type of beat choice. ur lyrics are again really good on this. the quality's not bad. like the "don't you realize you'll all be dead soon" line

Exhalation- didn't like this track, was hard to listen to.

Fake Eyelashes- nice beat, kinda like the voice on this one. and lyrics are pretty solid.

I Can't Breathe- nice intro into this song... ur kind of monotone on this tho.


Overall- Definitely not bad for your first project that i know of. the quality definitely needs to be upped. think into a 30 dollar logitech mic or sumtn. the mixing's not bad for what u worked with tho. and ur lyrics are solid on most of the tracks. defnly got potential. just keep at it man and work on ur stuff

[gutawafang]

Split Twice - beat is sick as fuuuck. ur delivery is fair, lyrics are pretty good man. the mixing takes getting use to. not bad man

Abortion- i like the way u started out... ur flow slipped a little. lmao at the point of view of the fetus again beat was sick

End the Pain2 - sick chorus. the beat's sick. ur flow is sick, the quality's a little distorted, but ur lyrics are pretty good on this. i heard quite a few multies.

You Forget Me- u got a unique type of beat choice. ur lyrics are again really good on this. the quality's not bad. like the "don't you realize you'll all be dead soon" line

Exhalation- didn't like this track, was hard to listen to.

Fake Eyelashes- nice beat, kinda like the voice on this one. and lyrics are pretty solid.

I Can't Breathe- nice intro into this song... ur kind of monotone on this tho.


Overall- Definitely not bad for your first project that i know of. the quality definitely needs to be upped. think into a 30 dollar logitech mic or sumtn. the mixing's not bad for what u worked with tho. and ur lyrics are solid on most of the tracks. defnly got potential. just keep at it man and work on ur stuff

Thanks for the in-depth feed man. I'll do better next time. Confirm.

[Le Tunisien]

Split Twice:

beat is dope,the flow sounds nice but there some flaws though,hmm you should work more on the flow,and delivery was aight i like the lyrics though
but why is it 1 minute only?hmm you shouldv finished it or get other people on it

Abortion,
ha i liked the chorus:
it started nice,hmm then at some lines you sounded like strugling to finish the lines,so at some few parts flow was a bit off and on,but overal its aight,lyrics dope as usual!
and again why dont u finish the track!

you forgot me:
this track is better than all the precedents your flow was nice,although it was a lil shaky at some parts,the delivery was ..okay ^^ and damn i love the lyrics!
and hmm there are some lines you need to add some words to make it flow nicer!

Exhalation:
like you said it was random =P hmm the flow off and on you shouldv kept the flow simple to make it easier for you to improve aha,

Fake Eyelashes:
damn nice beat! ha i like the hook :P flow was hmm enjoyable,you can improve the delivery though it is okay though!

I cant breath:
hey was it you in the intro and hook ?cuz it sounds dope lol
errr honestly i didnt like your voice on this one!and try to get the delivery like entertaining

anyways bro,keep practising you ll get there!cuz i feel the talent!keep workin homie!

[gutawafang]

Split Twice:

beat is dope,the flow sounds nice but there some flaws though,hmm you should work more on the flow,and delivery was aight i like the lyrics though
but why is it 1 minute only?hmm you shouldv finished it or get other people on it

Abortion,
ha i liked the chorus:
it started nice,hmm then at some lines you sounded like strugling to finish the lines,so at some few parts flow was a bit off and on,but overal its aight,lyrics dope as usual!
and again why dont u finish the track!

you forgot me:
this track is better than all the precedents your flow was nice,although it was a lil shaky at some parts,the delivery was ..okay ^^ and damn i love the lyrics!
and hmm there are some lines you need to add some words to make it flow nicer!

Exhalation:
like you said it was random =P hmm the flow off and on you shouldv kept the flow simple to make it easier for you to improve aha,

Fake Eyelashes:
damn nice beat! ha i like the hook :P flow was hmm enjoyable,you can improve the delivery though it is okay though!

I cant breath:
hey was it you in the intro and hook ?cuz it sounds dope lol
errr honestly i didnt like your voice on this one!and try to get the delivery like entertaining

anyways bro,keep practising you ll get there!cuz i feel the talent!keep workin homie!

Yeah, it's me on the intro of I can't Breathe. And thanks for commenting on the flow and delivery. I will improve on that.

Thanks for liking the lyrics.

[gutawafang]

Downloading now, props for being one of few here to have the initiative to finish an album

[Le Tunisien]

np bro

[Kosovic]

Is it me or you called your album "the 7 shits"

Okkkkay....will download and review.

[gutawafang]

Is it me or you called your album "the 7 shits"

Okkkkay....will download and review.

No, it's not you. I named it that way because it's still quite not good. And I appreciate your feedback in advance man.

[Kosovic]

I'll ermmm....try. Gonna download it, gimme a sec

[macdaddy019967]

cool ima definitely sownload this right now Guta i will give you my thouughts on it later

[Kosovic]

Yeeeeaaaah.... ummm... you really want a review?

Lyrics are mediocre at best, you have no flow, no emotion, you hardly get on tune with the beat. Your quality is low, to the point where you can't keep listening.

I suggest you give us the resources of your instrumentals, so that they can be used by others who can give quality.

[neversnooze]

good choices for beats and lyrics were alright.mixing good use work. as i was listening to the tracks, you voice reminded me of slim zaddy. sorry for not breaking it down track by track.