/--/ BIG AX-D - PUNCH LINE /--/ [short verse]

[B.A.D.]

I never do this kind of short punch line tracks, but I decided... why not give it a try... I think it went pretti fine.
the beat is entirely produced by me, no samples or shit like that.

AUDIO PEEPS READ HERE: If you like this song, I am actually planning to do a PUNCH LINE 2 track, and make it more like a mic pass.... so I'll holla at some of you.

so listen to this here: http://www.zshare.net/audio/721369303906f150/

LYRICS:

black out, youre in need of a revival
when Big Ax-D strikes, its like battle for survival
the bible dictates, respect your fellow rival
the mic is my weapon, the war's reachin its final
stage of disaster, the master is Axel
attack them with passion, Im bashing you out son
like sun shines along with my comeback
but I was never gone.. just drop the bomb back
you wanna drop and ask the others for opinions
but you are so wack, people might just think its genious
youre penis so small cant fit it in your girls
thats why she called Big... Ax-D finishing with pearls
sex education... I got an A plus
graduated from High School... Inteligence's a must
Problem's that, I hit a track, I pack it with a lot of that
a poison trap, u cant escape cuz Big Ax-D might bring a fact
that gonna make u cry, nigga's hurt, then they die
aint I right?, Damn I might, pick a knife for my fight
while they carry big guns, but the bullets aint loaded
I come out without a vest, niggaz shakin.. they know me
the dogs are so big, rottwilers do bite hard
Im die Hard, Bruce Willis type, with the right dart
make your girl wanna call me... she goin down south
she go back to your bead, and then kiss you on the mouth
Every Ho is a girl, Every girl aint a Ho
thats whats cocco told biggie... I told him... Fuck No!
unbelievable, my syllables are criminal
they diss me subliminally.. Afraid to go in at all
cuz I'll beat em all... and they turn suicidal
Im delighter by this bullshit.. my rivals turn final
the black Dahlia Murder.. the lion roaring's burning
the roof is on fire... but I aint even concernced
I get a psycho's adrenaline, Makes Fergie pee herself
Coraline's secret door... Damn it man, Im sick of her
bring her to my living room... turn on my TV
but bitch is Getting scared cuz Ax-D's on 3D
L.O.L. at this rappers who think they bring Hell
Im the funky homosapien... you can call me Del
Very well... this rappers fell... hiddin in a shell
like rabbit versus Turtle... but Turtles now fail
I shit on this niggaz, triggaz dont need to be popped
but you talk the wrong shit, most likely, you'll get shot
while I can go slim shady and bash on this bastards higher!
have sex with a nice lady and say...... it was mariah
uh!!

[randomghost]

good short verse bro..funny lines haha..simples beat..flow is hot...good stuff man

[Slice]

you got some nice lines.
and i enjoyed the flow

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat was somehow crazy and weird and unique at the same time
u did that?...i agree flow was kool,jumpy at parts but it kept the enjoyment...pronouncation fell off couple times...rhymes were also kool
nice verse

[Tash8]

i feel you're beats are always mixed too similar..ya know what i mean?

"Every Ho is a girl, Every girl aint a Ho
thats whats cocco told biggie... I told him... Fuck No!"

My fav lines, dope man

flow is pretty awesome all over... not gonna say much negatives but i think if you were to fix one thing, is not to use such common rhymes like del, hell, fell, well but besides that dope track

[classthe_king]

Audio is good as normal. But i didn't really like the lyrics at all. IMO lyrically it was below average. None of the punches seemed that good to me and I know tash will give me shit but you really need to use some multis. It makes everything sound better.

[Tash8]

Audio is good as normal. But i didn't really like the lyrics at all. IMO lyrically it was below average. None of the punches seemed that good to me and I know tash will give me shit but you really need to use some multis. It makes everything sound better.

why would i give u shit for that... multis are important..it's just morons on this forum think that they're the only thing that's important.

[gutawafang]

Fucking sick Ax!!! I loved it!

[B.A.D.]

thanks to everybody for the feed

but you really need to use some multis.

I used some multis even tho I hate to use them, its just a little cliche of hip hop wich I dont like. but I see your point, thaks for the honesty

and coleon.... even if you do it just beacause you hate me, every opinion is valuable to me, so thanks for listening

thanks again for listening/commenting

[Mr. Chambers]

Audio is good as normal. But i didn't really like the lyrics at all. IMO lyrically it was below average. None of the punches seemed that good to me and I know tash will give me shit but you really need to use some multis. It makes everything sound better.

why would i give u shit for that... multis are important..it's just morons on this forum think that they're the only thing that's important.

subliminals at me tash?????

[Tash8]

Audio is good as normal. But i didn't really like the lyrics at all. IMO lyrically it was below average. None of the punches seemed that good to me and I know tash will give me shit but you really need to use some multis. It makes everything sound better.

why would i give u shit for that... multis are important..it's just morons on this forum think that they're the only thing that's important.

subliminals at me tash?????

lmaoo what the fuck? I think u're one of the few members here that can actually use multis properly