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[New] Bar - Nothing To fear

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[New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '10, 20:32

new track done with my new mic, i aint got it locked on the mixing of this mic yet so its a bit raw ill learn how to mix it soon.


Bar - Nothing To fear
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jpx2kFuLiw4


feedback apreciated :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 4th, '10, 20:46

hook is nice but not yours :)
flow was steady..pretty decent...
pronouncation uh yeah...
and you right about the mixing..spend some time
to figure out the best way to mix :y:
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Re: [New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 7th, '10, 19:10

youtube is fuckin wid me :shakehead:

can u zshare it?
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Re: [New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby Tornado » Feb 7th, '10, 19:15

Love the flow and delievery on this one. Very slow and chill beat you can vibe to aswell with dope lyrics aswell. ish the quality was bteer but still dope shit
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Re: [New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby Tash8 » Feb 7th, '10, 19:17

i love it man...ok one thing i noticed u did on this track that you haven't done on another track is change up ur pitch...as the verse got along you were voice was getting louder, higher, it emphasized me to listen. GREAT JOB there. a few times i feel u slip, like u have to many words in there. Great beat, mixed badly though..

one of ur better more recent songs bar boy..keep it up
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Re: [New] Bar - Nothing To fear

Postby FAME » Feb 7th, '10, 19:37

A little hard to hear what your saying, but I can still understand it :flower: The beat fits nice and is sick, your flow over it is perfect in my eyes. Very chill feeling through the entire thing, which I like about it :happy: good job! :y:
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