by Most-Hated » Feb 6th, '10, 06:46
Haa I dug this song actually, it was well put together with a great beat.
I liked your verse but I do want to point out that it sounded like you ran out of breath a few times and you could hear heavy breathing...I have this same problem actually so we both need work lol
I thought your flow was very smooth. In yet it would have sounded great if you would put a lil more energy and sounded so Monotone...But thats just opinion because the mono does sound fitting for the beat for some reason..
Just somthing extra I think your verse would have sounded awesome with autotune...Idk why but I think it would have lol...
I liked it man

she takes me on a journey, to a place called hell,
she showed where she stays, she show me where she dwells,
theres an errie saddness, commin from the room,
its as if its a funeral, but were all doomed,
death all around, but i feel more comfort,
blood rained skies, you could say im covered,
the feelin from her, is like no other
dont wanna say it, but the demon i love her,