Bar - Nothing To fear - ReMixed By Tash

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

the mixing let the track down big time so tash helped out

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EdM8wp8tE

sounds alot better now

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

OMG TASH...did you use some black magic shit to make it sound that clean-er...
nice man....defo better

[enjinn]

this track is so damn ill!!!...honestly...whered you get this beat?

[FAME]

Sounds alot better indeed!

You two guys are the best duo ever

[B.A.D.]

Im pretti sure that I posted asking for a zshare link, was it deleted or??

either way, youtube is still fucking with me, Im gonna try to fix my comp to get it poppin, but for now I would appreciate a zshare link

[Vettori]

I'm on my iPod touch ATM and decided to check this out and I actually liked it.I really wish the vocals were the tiniest bit louder but from even wat I heard I liked it. I usually don't like those sample choruses but with the way the beat sounded it worked out. Cool track man gave me a new song to listen too

[B.A.D.]

good choice of beat, I like the sample on the hook

um... posts the lyircs man, I dont understand much.

verse 2 is much clearer at the begining, I like what I hear. starts reall nice but the last like 4 lines you loose the flow a bit.

verse 3... hmm...
I've heard way better from you, didnt enjoyed this much, verses and hook were also kinda short, and not really creative. and tbh, its seems like you was not enjoying it, seemed more like forced to do it, there was no emotion in your delivery. Maybe in your lyircs, but not in the way u brought it.

mixing is perfect 100%

keep it up.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

props on the feedback people appreciate it

lyrics

but now nothing seems the same since i went inside the game
like the cube was now my name the catch 22 is what i blame
everything was sailing smooth till i finally failed and losed
and how can i contain this news so my face dont proclaim the blues
feel like i digested some tryna get me out this slump
nothings ever been simple since we just kicked it at the pitch
just me and my three freinds some alchohal and a bitch
that was all we needed everything else was tomorrows problem

guess that was yesterday so now i gota deal with it
i wont run away i shall stay and keep real with it
now my main priorities are so fucked there annoying me
tryna keep girl happy who is obviously just torying with me
now im tryna make the money to up in my music buisness
back of my head im wonderig is anyone even wants to listen
look, shhhh, ill make it glisten tackle any problem given
and if im giving up this shit i guess im giving up living

never let the dream die couldnt no matter how i try
its imbedded in my brain so look i shall make it fly
i feel like im a fucking little guy not grew up since i skinned my knees
in primary 4 and it made me cry yup go make the tie
david vs goliath got my rock aimed right at rap
as i write my rap, i tackle all giants fuck the jolly green bitch
i go defiant, yup sorta like a tyrant even though i dont like the violence
nothing seems to go full circle painted in the colour purple

@ax-d i find it strange you say the 3rd verse wasnt creative, it was the only verse i used anything creative in, the first to were just events and feelings from my life, the third one was the one i actually used any sort of creativity in.

nothing seems to go full circle painted in the colour purple

the colour purple is a very in depth book and film touching on alot of very deep emotions, race's, discrimination..hence why nothing goes full circle (feels fair) like its all painted in the colour purple..i think thats more creative than anything else i spat.

i feel like im a fucking little guy not grew up since i skinned my knees
in primary 4 and it made me cry yup go make the tie
david vs goliath got my rock aimed right at rap
as i write my rap, i tackle all giants fuck the jolly green bitch

using words to paint a picture of feeling weak and having to fight it, thats a creative way of me doing it other than just saying how it feels, david vs goliath metaphor for me tackling rap is a more creative line than the ones in the first 2 verses. the jolly green line is a reference to david bein a giant and again the kid like weakness im tyring to potray so im using the jolly green giant as an example here to keep that kid like image while showing im trying to tackle things that are bigger than me. (the jolly green giant from green giant sweet corn yes)

i felt the third verse was were i opened of the creativity so it was weird you felt it lacked it.

[Robbie G]

I really liked it but to me the vocals were a little too low. The beat seemed to overshadow the words.

Good job though