the volume of the acapella is exageratedly high
but damn, yes this is an improvement, but I can still notice several flaws in the flow.
what I can clearly see here is that you didnt took my advice of the too short thing. Im serious about that, you should consider taking a more chillaxed west coast vibe for your voice.
great improvement but there is still a road ahead. congrats, also this track is good to listen to, I liked it a lot.
so keep working on the flow, and remember what I told you again.
lyrics were stepped up, congrats on that, still can be better.
also speaking about the lyrics, there were a couple racist things I spotted there, try to keep that to a minimum.
I have currently moved to New South Wales and this is my first track recorded here. Soon i will release my first EP. I think i am ready to be able to make one now. My lyrics have improved and everything, so be on the lookout 
