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Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 8th, '10, 19:01

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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 8th, '10, 22:48

damn that one was impressive....song i could enjoy by chambers...
beat is creepy...so is the delivery...somthin creepy about it but in a sick way
hook has a pretty boring vocal track on it..the high track is allright but the somethin sounds bored in it
lyrics are very enjoyable...
mixing could be a little bit louder imo...but sounds pretty clean..still like all your recordings very bassy..dont know how to explain it....
great track overall :y: finally :zipped:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby mcZu » Feb 8th, '10, 22:56

Enjoyed it, though, sometimes, some words are too slurred. Or unclear. And the chorus bugs me out as well like C-rizzo said, the vocals are too loud in volume compared to the beat. Besides that I enjoyed it Chambers, pretty solid track man. And lol at the Sticcy and Strict sumblimes.
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Solace » Feb 9th, '10, 00:24

This was tight cept for the chorus. Gotta get your singing fixed up! But verses and beat choice are all tight...
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 9th, '10, 00:25

damn, you sound clear. really good, the first word I hear I went :o amazing mixing man. :y: but there's still lag :shakehead:

ooh man, nooo. hahahhaa.... the hook is Bad, :shakehead: ... you should've left the lil girls singin in the background and use like a FFT Filtered voice in the background in a talking way u know, wouldve also fit well in the track.

the 3 verses are great, lyrically up there, specially the third verse, the punchlines are sick sick sick, plus lmao at the subs.... nice lil short punchlined diss.... I thought you was going to take a more serious topic to this beat.

everything excelent, except the hook :shakehead: hahaha.... but damn, still an amazing track.
great job man.

gonna be interesting to see if sticcy re-responds :y:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 9th, '10, 02:11

Oh man, that is awesome man. :flutter:

Crazy lyrics. The hook can be improved haha. The mixing, yes it's good! :worship:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 9th, '10, 02:56

good looks on the feedback..yea i think i'ma take this back to the lab and touch up the chorus....
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby classthe_king » Feb 9th, '10, 04:36

This was fire :worship:

BTW your sig said your tape should have come awhile ago, why the hold up :confusion:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 9th, '10, 05:05

uhmmmm...first delay was cuz i had shit going on in life.....
second delay was for the same....
third delay.....was becuz my parents decide to build a walk in closet in my room...(i had this planned to release since about september...)
the fourth delay is because i'm switching up...and making this kinda like a concept mixtape.....kinda basing it off "a long hot summer" from masta ace...this is gonna have more of an album feel too since 95% of the beats gonna be soundclick beats.....and i might have a very special guest feature for this tape..... :whistle:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Xray » Feb 9th, '10, 16:55

This is by far your best track I've heard. I see you worked on mixing, pretty good man, sounds clearer/cleaner than usual. The hook though needs another 1 or 2 layers and that shit would sound ILL. I really like the hook and the reverb you used on your vocals is dope. I don't got much to say other than add another layer or two to that hook and this track will be set. Dope track. Good job. :y:
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 10th, '10, 01:26

^good looks...i'ma prolly change the last two lines.......and sing them a lil better and fuller....i'ma still fairly new @ mixing singing....it honestly doesn't sound this bad when i sing it outload :(
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 11th, '10, 01:26

sky high...i got thar
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby AlexRambo » Feb 11th, '10, 05:17

Damn brother, I'm very impressed with the track overall. The beat goes hard, the lyrics are entertaining, and the flow is pretty smooth. Oh and regardless of the negative feedback from others regarding the chorus, I like the way it sounds, not that you're a good singer but the mood the tone in your voice presents. Keep up the good work dawg!
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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 18th, '10, 01:46

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Re: Demons (Produced by Anno Domini & Life and Death)

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 18th, '10, 02:23

i have this beat, it's dope.

flow is nice, rhyming is sick too. dope verse.

hook, at the end it's a bit hard to understand the end, but it's good.

second verse was basically as dope as the first, no complaints, good shit.

rhymes off "winning the title" were great. another dope verse.

Overall, the single complaint i have is that you sound a bit bored at times. other than that, nice job
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