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Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 12th, '10, 00:38

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvp5VMTlJCs

Let me know what yall think its a deep one kinda personal hope you feeling it !!! :)
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby mcZu » Feb 12th, '10, 00:44

Pretty good actually, nice flow and the delivery sounds pretty good. Mixing sounds awful though. And your quality is bad, work on that. Nice song.
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 12th, '10, 00:51

you listened to it to earli dude it was still processing :L its finished so take another listen mixin isnt bad :L
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby mcZu » Feb 12th, '10, 01:00

I still think that the mixing sounds awful. Your vocals are too raspy.
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby _Ironic_ » Feb 12th, '10, 01:02

are you singing the hook? sounds dope in the beginning

flow on this is fuckin dope bro, lyrics are pretty tight as well...

yeah this shit is pretty dope, im feelin the chorus, makes it have a very high replay value

2nd verse comes in well, the delivery could use SOME work, but not much, but your flow is incredible,

9/10

awesome drop bro, i'd recommend this to the top songs of the week.

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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 12th, '10, 01:17

haha thank man yer ill hit you back with some feed man appricate it !!!
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby Terry_M » Feb 13th, '10, 00:25

I really enjoyed this, the hook was really good, and the lyrics are something everyone can relate to. Maybe the mixing could be a bit better. Overall, very well done.
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 13th, '10, 01:22

hey thanks yall i yer i get what yall saying about the mixing could be better but it sounds better as an mp3 track plus it was mixed though headphones so thats probably the problem thanks for the feed tho yall keep it comin
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 14th, '10, 14:59

Bump !!

YOU NEED FEED ??? holla at me with some an ill rtf!
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby Slice » Feb 14th, '10, 15:51

ok the flow is dope..
it sounds good when you start to rap after the singing hook :y:
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 21st, '10, 06:06

bumppp :P
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby Tranquil » Feb 21st, '10, 06:55

this was really good man :y: cant wait to hear more of you bro. i have to say i wasnt a fan of the mixing, but still a good track man :b:
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 22nd, '10, 00:01

thanks man really apprciate it an the mixing could be alot better but the mic cost 12 £ so :L
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby Restlesswon » Feb 22nd, '10, 03:04

this song is cool,got a nice sound to it,crazy flow there,on point,stay up bro
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Re: Gibbsy+Better Dayz (Deep)

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Feb 22nd, '10, 03:15

thanks man really apprciate it :)
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